by whields
Really, REALLY, needs to be Proof Read! Numerous errors that seem small combine to erroneous that quality of an otherwise FANTASTIC ENCOUNTER.
Well situated with a pending disclosure by returning parents lending an immediacy for completion.
The characters are as expected and the transformation seems well practiced.
Now for the sex, great sex with quick recovery and a Round Two.
I have seen a suggestion of recording yourself Proof Reading your essay. Then, while playing your recording back, read along to spot the little blips popping up throughout.
Wish I had someone like that to bend me over and take me. MMMM!!!
Great story and well thought out.
Very nice, a quick read of wonderful sex. I love the thought of having a delivery like that. 'Did anyone order a man, he's at the door.'
unsafe sex. possibly an old story before condoms were such a good idea.