All Comments on 'Crossed Lines'

i so very much love your stories .please could you keep posting here. thanks.

Reminded me of one that I wrote on here a while back. I'd love to see a second chapter.

This story has an art piece to go with it that can be found in the imgur link on my profile bio!

And thank you Whiskey :D I'll have to go and check out your similar piece! <3 Xx

I really love this! Please continue the series. The demon now own him and will be with him all the time. I like to think that she was dominant, playful and mischief. Maybe she can shapeshift or possess people too. Like, When he was home, she possess his mother or sister to fuck him and when in school she possess his crush too. She never leave his life, she will be his girlfriend and mistress forever.

in all honest this is the exact same story that whiskey wrote a while ago. I mean it's literally almost the exact same story.

@Anon, having read Whiskey's story after his comment... Yup! A lot of similarities! However I don't recall having read his story prior to writing mine and while reading it a couple of days ago, I didn't have this moment of, "Oooh I remember reading this back in 2016!" so I guess it's just a massive coincidence. I hope mine is different enough to be enjoyable all the same, even if Vas is no Lilith! ^.^ Xx

I wish to find similar book

and the moral of the story is, play stupid games, win stupid prizes, so you better damned well LIKE receiving anal before you try summoning a succubus.