All Comments on 'Crossfire Ch. 02'

Both the sex, and the plot behind.

and jenny is right you should never be ashamed of who you are

Great story. Hope there's more.

A very well done! You've caught these two really well! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you!

Judgemental commenters aside, you've captured the cognitove dissonance that Lauren struggles with in her daily life. It's so easy to judge Lauren, but rewuires empathy to understand Lauren's emotional issues. Yours is a sensitive & honest portrayal of two women at different points in their srlf identities. I'm looming forward to seeing this story unfold. Hopefuly you'll continue your brilliant & bold exploration because it could easilly just collapse into yet another closeted lesbian finding her sexual identity. Keep it real!

Waiting for chapter 3.....

"Fantabulous!!!!"