All Comments on 'Crossfire Ch. 03'

Wish the chapter was longer, great story.

A wonderful addition to this story! Thank you!

Way too short but nevertheless breath-taking. Thanks for writing and I'd love to see more of your work.

As the other's said,wish it was a bit longer but it's a great story! Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing your talent!

I'm very much liking this series. Lauren and Jennifer are so hot. I'm ready for chapter 4.

Can't wait for the next part. Thank you for sharing this.

Wish the chapters where a tad longer otherwise thank you for sharing your work hope to be seeing more of Jennifer and Lauren for more than a few chapters

Jennifer is a bitch for trying to force Lauren to come out when she's not ready.

Please

Oooh wee! This is good. The power of pussy can be a two edge sword. Jennifer Jennifer, tsk tsk - she's pushing Lauren too fast. It's not like they're in a relationship. Why sacrifice her job, her reputation, etc to the demands of a woman who she doesn't even know if she'll be there long term. Jen can up and leave and go back to California leaving Lauren to hold the bag of her messed up life after coming out, in her hands. Degausser, what is Jennifer sacrificing? These concerns may be worth exploring, if you haven't already in some upcoming chapters. Either way, I'm onboard the Tube with this story

We need a new chapter! Don't leave us hanging like in "Just wanna be the girl you like"! Please!

It's been going so well! Any progress with the next chapter? (you've set high expectations posting first three installments so fast after one another.)

Valid points brought up by germanchocolate4u. If Jennifer wants Lauren to come out completely and publicly, the least she can do is assure her that she loves her, wants only her, and is in it for the long haul. I'm hoping she'll do just that. Thanks again for a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

One of the joys of Lit is how you can stumble onto a story and author somewhat randomly. I came across the first chapter of this series when it was listed in the Similar Stories list of another story that I really enjoyed. I'll join the others in saying that I'd love to see you continue the adventures of Lauren and Jennifer, to see how their relationship - both personally and professionally - develops. In particular, would love to see them develop their D/s relationship that you have hinted at throughout. Many possibilities here.

Great story, I enjoyed it... hopefully there's more!

Story has a certain amount of verismo which is fairly rare on the site - inhibitions, social pressures, reservations: real life!