All Comments on 'Crossing a risky line'

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NegamerguyNegamerguyover 3 years ago

Loved it!

More of this couple please!!!

lsnid003lsnid003over 3 years ago
Love this!

Your characters are amazing, and I love the line about giving older men more attention. My husband is 12 years older than me, and I wholeheartedly agree, they know what they are doing. I’d love to see more about these two.

Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

Oh my! Wow! Oh wow!

Love the way you built the mystery and sexual tension, revealing their lust in layers....

And the sex is wonderfully intimate and sensuous!

I like the doctor-patient/courier plot line, and the undressing of each.

Excellent!

Thank you.....

nastydenny70nastydenny70over 2 years ago

Oh my I couldn't keep my hands away from playing with myself.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very hot…love it when the incredible risk being taken is like a hidden fire fueling the flames of passion..knowing it’s so wrong but it’s irresistible…

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