All Comments on 'Crossing Moon Ch. 05'

Damn i shouldve waited until you finished, now im gonna be in suspense until the next chapeter and the next and so on. Well :D im loving where the story is heading and will definitely be keeping track (: hehe avvie is so stubborn and adrian..interesting. And whos ray? CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

please continue, your stories are awesome and i can't wait for the next entries, you're great and have a real talent

sorry, this story just sux...BIG BIG BIG TIME

I like this story ur talented. The build up is a little slow but im still hooked and can't wait to get to the end.

I like the story. I just wish the chapters were longer.