All Comments on 'Crossing Over Pt. 01'

Well, Shaima, I think you've done it again. 'Crossing Over' has all the makings of another winner so don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter(s). I loved the motto "Don't walk in front of me..." Such a very simple thing but it brought a lump to my throat. Thanks.

Can't wait to read more of your story! Plus looking forward to reading more stories from you! Your a wonderful writer!! Thanks for sharing them with us!

Beauty, saddeness, hope and joy! All in the first chapter! Thank you!

Another excellent story, with people who are really people, who have real joys and sorrows - not just some paper cutouts who end up in bed in the first thirty seconds.

Wonderful beginning. I can't wait for part two. I love all your stories. You're very talented.

I like you chatty style and I look forward to the next installment.

What a wonderful beginning to a lovely story. I can't wait for the second installment. Done with great feelings and emotions. Loved it. Thanks

I love the slow build you bring to your stories, true friendship leading to romance and more. Very well done!!!

I also like the poem

I saw myself in it because I don't wish to lead nor do I like to follow. It said so simply what I've felt so often. Thank you

I love it so far. Easily five stars, but please learn to not use comma splices! The logic is kind of funny though. It makes sense for Sigrid, but Louise needing to be careful around her because she's straight is like saying she needs to be careful not to each chocolate because she doesn't like chocolate. Apparently she does like chocolate. ;)

Lovely story. The characters seem real and the build up is tangible.

But I gotta say OMG, I live in the area where the story is based. So weird to read about places I go.

Any way, keep up the great work :)

Damn good story..

But how comes the Danish touch?

The name you use, have been used in a Danish tele serie, called Borgen....

And it's fun, you tell about "Hygge".. No country have a word like that, so it's rather diff to explain in other languages, lol

Belinda

love learning new words.....