All Comments on 'Crossing Over Pt. 04'

Love it! Love it! Love it! You make my day when I see you've posted a new chapter!!! Great story from start to finish. Would love to hear Melanie and Elke's story too! Thanks!

All four chapters were just wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us. Add me to the list of readers who are thrilled to check in and see a new story or chapter by you. Thank you!

You have a gift for writing and this story shows it! Well done and look forward to reading your next one! Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent!

I really like the story, the characters and the plot.

I have one remark, and that is regarding the sex scenes.

It seems to me that you shrink away from writing the sex, it's like an afterthought. In other areas you add a lot of details, you bring out the atmosphere, and this is lacking in the sex scenes. I don't see the scene in mind's eye like I can see it in the more plot scenes,

Not saying that you don't write well, contrary. I enjoy the way you write. It's just a thing to improve on.

I read all the parts, but this one was better than the last 3, it is a shame that a parent would disown there child just because she wants to be with the one she loves

I read the whole series and i think it was more a love story, a romance than a sex story.

what a wonderful story, one of your best.

I will say this. I thought, as I read all the chapters, that this really belonged in the Non-Erotic category as opposed to Lesbian Sex. Having said that, I am very glad you did put it here, because I probably would have not read it otherwise. And like I said, I would have missed a good love story.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story and loved the characters. 5 stars. Thank you.

A wonderful ending to this love story! And with a promise of more, so very yummy! Thank you!

I very much enjoyed your story. There where so many levels to the character development that kept me coming back. Perhaps the unspoken discussion regarding sexuality and attractions is choice. So many people today will acknowledge their attraction to a particular individual regardless of gender. To many of my straight friends this raises their ire and claims that someone coming to this place was always in the closet and now just came out. Other friends of mine within the gay community reject this argument also and feel in lessens the claim to "born like this." Your story captured so many aspects of this that I just smiled and now will wait for your next story.

Thank you for the time and energy you put into your work. A nice respite for the quickie, sticky, I have no plot authors.

DRock

I read all four parts of this beautiful love story and I thank you for it. It is so realistic and honest and it demonstrates what true love is all about.

Keep up the good work; I plan to read more of this author's work.

In my opinion this is in my top ten all-around stories in Literotica. It pushes all the emotional buttons.

Thank you for sharing your work with us. I enjoy your type of writing, the development of a relationship. I like stories with plots, so I have really enjoyed every story I have read so far. I hope you continue to write, I would love to read on of your books so if you publish any do let us know.

Thanks again, Sam x

This comment applies to all parts of "Crossing Over".

A really good love story, sex left to the culmination of the series, rounding off the outcome perfectly. Nice One!

And never discount the Spirit World.

this was the most lovely story ,it had every emotion going .

I cried with the lines "ill watch over you. till we meet again."

a love story in more than one way

I have favorited each of the four parts; but I am writing this one comment at the end. This is definitely a story I will read over and over again. I loved it, what a gem--even perfect doesn't seem to do it justice. This is truly a love story, and a story which contains a lot of love. Character development: these people are so real--I wish I knew them personally as friends of mine. Everything just seemed so real, so possible and so lifelike. Don't ever stop writing, PLEASE! Don't bother writing anything short, it would be a waste of your skills. I wish I could write like this, SIGH!

A really good story, well put together. Thanks.

I love your work. Your honest and open heart shines through in all of your characters. I am a proud Aussie fan

Told with compassion and joy. Thanks.

I must say that this is a most compelling story, and I do enjoy a happy ending, and I am very pleased that you seem to be living happily ever after!

What a beautiful story. I can’t imagine losing a sibling or being so ridiculously religious that I would disown my child because of her sexual preference. This was a beautiful story .. thank you so much .. ❤️❤️

shaima dear,this elderly yank enjoyed this remarkable novel betw een two lovely ladies that finally let them selves loose and expressed their long built feelings for each other, as with all your stories i've read over the past few years the touch you put i feel myself and enjoy thoroughly THANX

seeing their love grow and making the tricky transition from best friends to lovers. The way you told the story it is as if they were lovers from the beginning. I didn't miss a long drawn out sex scene. A well written love story does not need prolonged explicit sex and the detail of their first time was perfect.

Except for Louise and Cathy's mother the love and support from friends and family was gratifying. Unfortunately there are more than enough negative people in real life.

Five stars all the way. Thank you.

Absolutely wonderful ..... Your so talented with your ART ..... And the sentences about life in general how to deal with thinks in a partnership fabulous ..... Love it to bits ..... And yes parents can be the opposite and treating his own kind badly .... Thank you for your love and wisdom you offer her in this storys

Loved this and as always this story touched my heart. You seem to work magic upon the page thanks for bewitching me for a time.

A touching wonderful story. I’m in the process of reading all of your work here and am enjoying them immensely. I hope you are planning some new ones this year. Thank you!

I endorse all the preceding comments. I am an 82 yo English man, discovering love with a 59 yo Chinese woman. We have gone to places I never imagined possible, and due to Covid we haven't physically met yet after 18 months! Our only contact is email and a monthly phone call.

All we need are trust and love.

SSSSOOOO much longer ... SSSSOOOO much better.

cute story i enjoyed it. I am trying to read the stories in order in which characters are first introduce

On second reading, I found this story … less appealing. Because practically everything that happened was already known to happen. Its suspense sails were empty of air.

To be clear, the story was good. It was the style of presentation I found lacking.

All this "this about to happen" and then it did? Kind of boring, knowing what's going to happen. "Show and tell" are in that order for a reason. "Tell and show" just doesn't really work.

It's a huge risk of flashback stories. It takes careful careful planning to not let the cats out of the bag as you go. I didn't feel that kind of planning was done here.

Brilliant story. Erotic, heartwarming, sad and joyous. Thanks.