All Comments on 'Crossing the Divide'

That's very yummy! I hope you'll continue this story! Thank you!

Thank you for your words of encouragement. I might just follow up the tale . . .

All in all a good story except for the ending, I am glad to read a hev story and hopefully there is more to come with hev

I tried to leave the end "hanging" and, from your comments, I guess I succeeded! A follow-up will be forthcoming shortly, setting off from where I left Hev and Naomi.

Good to see another story from you. Top notch as usual. Great ending, leaving it open for more. Hope to see.more soon. Always looking forward to your stories.

SB

Thank you for your encouraging words. More will follow soon . . .

Ancient Oriental proverb: "She who gives scholars free bar deserves all shit Heaven can fling."

And yes, Hev's sudden propensity for sleep must have been Rohypnol. It couldn't possibly have anything to do with several pints of bitter and a couple of bottles of plonk---just not feasible. Good to see her enjoying herself.

Second Ancient Oriental proverb: "She with valuable wine cellar should beware thirsty Lesbian girl."

I've read your stories before... and I know I made a mental note that you're good! I have to go back and read but for now... this was OFF THE CHARTS!!!!!!! Crossing the divide indeed!

I haven't had so many ancient Chinese proverbs quoted at me before but admire the two you've just come up with. There's all sorts of historic wisdom in both. Thank you for sharing them with me.

I'm glad you seem to have enjoyed my latest effort. Please do go back and read more but be warned: I now have 104 submissions published on here. Reading them all might take a while!

Class and humour, as always. And great sex.