All Comments on 'Crossing The Line...'

by RiversEdge2010

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whitetrash11whitetrash11over 11 years ago
good story

that was a good story. it flowed well, the sex scenes were written well, and I actually would have liked more expansion on the squirting factor. good story dude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another great story!

Keep 'em coming, riversedge. They're the best. Superb!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
LIKE THE OLD SAYING

any head is great. TK U MLJ LV NV

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