All Comments on 'Crossing the Line'

by Ann Douglas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot as...

Great story, Hot as H, and we hope it's continued! 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good chapter

I hope there's more of this. I really appreciate that you are finally posting here on Literotica.

sj_53sj_53over 6 years ago
Hot, Hot, Hot

WOW I just loved both parts of this story. Glen was a very lucky guy to have a teacher like Cathy. AKA Anne O'Donnell. Sabrina was even hotter than the scene with Glen.

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204about 4 years ago
Hoping for more to cum

Ann, your story is magnificent for a starter to a complex series of small town relationships. Lots of ladies are introduced, but we only get to meet one of the men. I'd like to read sequels, e.g., like Sabrina's husband, Tom Drake, getting connected with Stephanie and maybe Jim Donohue giving Lydia a toss. Lots of possibilities for a lot of loving here to explore.

kathy2012kathy2012almost 2 years ago

Incredible story! A young man with a perpetual hard on! A strap on that never gets soft! What not to like! I love the doggy position with my lover, if I arch my back just right she rubs my G-spot just right! Wonderful!

Regards,

Kathy

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...