All Comments on 'Crossing The Road'

Unlike many of your admittedly very sexy stories, this one was much more realistic. Often you include an ingredient that demands suspension of disbelief, and that can be slightly disconcerting (although I can see the fun in stretching the everyday truth into fantasy). This story however, was believable and utterly delicious. I loved the playful dialogue and the descriptions of their respective thoughts and feelings. Lovely!

A very well written story, with an interesting plot and at the right pace. Some good dialogue, such as 'dance down the sidewalk.' Ended a bit abruptly, but I guess we can assume that Sam and [Baby???] became lovers.

Not titillating, but very pleasant to read.

Nice story. I'd like to see where it goes next.