All Comments on 'Crow's Path Ch. 02'

Enjoying the length of the chapters!

Thank you very much ^.^

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next installment.

I have really enjoyed the story; probably because it is a story. The sex is used to enhance the narrative but I t is not the central theme. Well done, that's what makes a story great. This story has so much potential and can go so many ways, I'm dying to see it mature. Please keep going. You're are doing great. Thanks.

Jack

Like the other comments, good story well written, though maybe could do with a touch more editing (sorry, pedant here).

Happy to help with editing, especially if that is why Ch 03 hasn't been released yet!

Good story. It is well written and the plot keeps me interested.

The character development enhances the erotica. Keep writing this story! I’m anxious to learn more about this mysterious island and about whatever is creating a conundrum for Sam and Crow.

One of the most fetching stories I've read. It would be one of my favorite if finished. It's a pity you stopped posting. Please continue.

Well done for the story so far, I like it a lot. Looking forward to the next chapters!

That's all you got, there is nothing worse than an unfinished story!

I am looking forward to the next lot of chapters to this story. Really enthralling