All Comments on 'Cruel to be Kind'

The writing style is very good! I think you would have had more luck in nonhuman or fantasy/sci-fi categories. I see you are new in writing on Lit. Drop me a line if you have any questions -- and keep writing :)

Please ask for an editor to assist you. I gave up reading because of the writing. I’m sure that there is a good story in there.

This is a great start, however you really, really need someone to edit your writing. There were so many errors that it was incredibly difficult to read.

thanks everyone for the feedback

i'm very happy to see people reading it.

also i'm very grateful for the suggestion i'll take them into consideration.

i'm looking for an editor now. i'll come back with an edited, longer and well developed chapter.

great!!!!

Cant wait for the next part!!

I will wait forever for the next part :D

Great story hope you're still working on it.