All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Cruise'

That was a very interesting story. cant wait to read the latest addition. i hope you keep up your good work. have a good year and keep writing

A great story and i good flow. I look forward to reading more of your work

mmmm again I am tantalized by yet another great story, please keep up the work..

Your story has taken my fantasy oone step closer,, Thank you

Well done Patricia, this is one of your best stories...more please. I prefer your lesbian stories to anyone else's.

... was a disappointment though :)

Gay Executive invited on a Cruise needs a 'beard' to make everything look on the up and up with his Superiors. His female friend agrees to pass herself off as his girlfriend. Meeting two other girls she's soon very much involved in getting to know her two 'new friends' better. Erotic Read!

...they shed the pantyhose. Now the story had a chance for some real eroticism.

..the tights(pantyhose for u Americans)! there is nothing so unerotic as tights. Please, I am a bisexual woman and just like my (male) partner, I find there is nothing more erotic than either hold-ups or proper suspenders and stockings. It is visually sexy as well as sensually amazing.

Those stinky, thrush inducing bags of nylon should be banned from life not just stories. I will never wear them, nor panties either for that matter. I want my cunt to be clean and fresh and attractive and...yes...ready. Love Sofi xx

I'd like to think it would happen, but I doubt it. However you have written it in a very sexy manner. Well done. The orgasmic mind boggles. Loved it

I love a three way between women; there’s just something so beautiful about it. You portrayed it in such a lovely way. Thanks for a wonderful read.

IDB.

Thank goodness there’s another part I was about to knock off 3stsrs from a very good story.

Bill