All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Quarantine Ch. 02'

by nikki_2021

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RamazaRamazaalmost 3 years ago

A very fun, loving and kinky family, I loved both part, very well done

namidaboshinamidaboshialmost 3 years ago

This needs to be a series. Such good writing. Really happy to see you posting here again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic follow up, incredibly sexy and well written.

sjerald67sjerald67almost 3 years ago

More Please. Loved both parts!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

This just reinforces what I always knew really I just love your juicy stories. Nice to read something new from you.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 3 years ago

Sort of the same thing over and over. No loving family, just sex, except for negative Negative Nelly, the Bitch Vera.

Thanks for sharing your work with us. 4*s

michael1664michael1664almost 3 years ago

Brillaint story more please

JxxxTolkienJxxxTolkienalmost 3 years ago

Would love to see the series continue.

Horse_DrawnHorse_Drawnover 2 years ago

Loved it!! Keep up the good work šŸ‘

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it, would like to se become super series. So sucking fucking hot. Maybe you find some more cock and cunt crazed cunts to join in along with another cock maybe. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lancā€™s U.K.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story could have been more intensified as you can clearly read that there were enough days in the story. Just one of the days the sis n bro fuck each other insanely in the bathroom while mom is sleeping or fucking near the balcony of the room or the brother cannot control his urge to fuck his sis in the ass in goes in the her room in the night while the sis is in deep sleep and fuck her in her sleep in both holes etc would have made the story more erotic. Any way it's been a pleasure to read your stuff would love to read more stuff from you..šŸ˜€šŸ¤˜šŸ”„

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Vera's daniels are too much and ruined the mood.

des67des67over 2 years ago

Loved it... An amazing storyline... 5 Stars... A 3rd chapter would be awesome... Added to favorites...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thanks for a good story.

Bill

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You kind of ruined it for me with the guy taking it in the ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I truly loved the story, great action and believable! you are really great with the conversation between the characters! I loved the mom eating daughters cream pie, that was awesome! If you find the time to continue the story line I'd be so happy to read more, really love the characters and there interactions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The hypocrisy and cruelty from the women ruined it for me. Certainly didn't help that the guy seemed to be a human dildo or at best 3/5ths of a person.

SnoopygirlSnoopygirlover 2 years ago

Loved this story, thanks! I have no issues at all with it I thought it was great as is. More ā€˜realisticā€™ the way it actually is which gives me the exact titillation I need I guess. Loved it. Keep up the great writing too Nikki.

Goodtunes2Goodtunes2over 2 years ago

I love the way you write. The ebb and flow of the story line and the realism is very well done.

Yes...arousal on steroids. Nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Soooooo good. Gosh

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sounds a lot of fun. 4 or 5 weeks of good times. But how about the future? Surely they get together many more times!

LeB

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 2 years ago

(2/7/2022) So, being emotionally abused and humiliated by his Mommy Dearest and self-centered bitch sister was for, What? A couple of thrusts into said self-centered bitch sisterā€™s butt? Oh, and while being pegged by Momy Dearest too. Not my cuppa tea. If I wanted to read Femdom/BDSM Iā€™d have chosen that category. He didnā€™t know what they were going to do to him. But, he trusted Mommy Dearestā€¦, and she gave him a safe word. So, what does someone do to someone they humiliate? They make them worthless in both their and his eyes. Daniel was betrayed by the two most important women in his life just because they were horny, which is how I read this. They turned their son/brother into a tool without any consideration of how it would affect him. But itā€™s okay because as we all know heā€™d like itā€¦, in the end. I don't believe that that should be a given here. But hey itā€™s only a fantasy, right. I will probably get piled on for my comment, but I call them as I see them.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 2 years ago

Good story. Mother was/is a good teacher. After all was said and done, no one self-esteem, ego nor standing in the family unit was harmed. In fact, I believe trust, emotional security, and family bonds were strengthened.

Gym52Gym52about 2 years ago

A great plotline, beautifully described as was the characterisation of each of the family members. An interesting erotic situation with the added stimulus of being confined together in a very restricted area.

smoke717smoke717about 2 years ago

One of the best series to be read anywhere

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticabout 2 years ago

I liked the first part but not this second one. I have been taking a look at the rest of this author's stories but they don't seem my cup of tea.

tjreadertjreaderabout 2 years ago

On page 4 I was mad at the girls on Daniel's behalf. After the safe word, I wouldn't have fucked either of them. Not until they'd each had a go in the chair. Screw them! That's just cruel, and they laughed like it was fucking funny. Nope. No way. Fuck that noise.

tjreadertjreaderabout 2 years ago

Okay. I pushed through the part that made me mad (it's a me thing. Honestly, it's a testament to how good the writing is) and I finished the story. It was definitely good. Solid 4/5 from me, and wouldn't mind if Clara, Daniel and Vera got into more shenanigans later! šŸ˜šŸ‘šŸ¼

rbloch66rbloch66almost 2 years ago

Fucking bitches that take pleasure in demeaning menā€¦. and Iā€™m NOT referring to the characters, although Vera was a fucking cunt. Iā€™m done with your stories.

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsalmost 2 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed this series. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

it didn't do anything for me.

Just fucking. I'm more incline towards a love story between family members.

JBadams404evaJBadams404evaalmost 2 years ago

this tjreader is a pussy they just played with him acting like they in hellraiser or something

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yeah, men are inferior in any way, I'm just puzzled how patriarchy came into existence.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I LOVE that you included anal on him!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I got to the words "Ruined orgasm" and quit. Any person that would intentionally do that is pretty cruel and likely needs a physc. Lets toss them some kittens to kill also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliantly fun to read,

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think that's enough Nikki for me. I hope you find a different hobby. Peace.

Dozer1341Dozer1341over 1 year ago

Awesome I loved it I read it twice and it only got better. Definitely a hot story

morbiusrgmorbiusrgover 1 year ago

Kinky and delightful! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just reread both chapters, absolutely sucking fucking fabulous. Reminds me of the fab incestuous fucking and sucking with my sisters and mother. Mother organised more frequent sex sessions, right after joining in when she caught me with three of my sisters while I was fucking one while eating another and finger fucking a third. So fucking depraved and debauched. Seven hot cock and cunt crazed women to fuck and suck. It is a wonder that I did not fuck myself to death. I absolutely adore cunt in every way and the more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I know itā€™s been a year but you canā€™t leave us hanging like that did both women whine up pregnant or not and did they story continue what happens now does the dad find out if he alive or what happened

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please give us another installment. This was incredibly sexy and left my nerve endings tingling and loads of precum slipping from my tip. I love tasting my precum. Does Vera save her ass for him only? I hope you can give us more of this. Thank you for these two chapters.

loveanalincestloveanalincestabout 1 year ago

Incredible and very spicy story, thanks for the trip

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Man that story has me feeling like the kids from meatballs bill Murry movie where thereā€™s a scene in it where theyā€™re in the lunch hall and all the kids say we want gossip gossip we want gossip except itā€™s weā€™re we want more information and more story like did both women whined up pregnant from the almost four weeks quarantine or not

keki123keki12310 months ago

Not as good as the previous one.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Yeah this one kinda sucked

KentLondonKentLondon7 months ago

I always had a negative view of cruises, but these stories might change my point of view!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Iā€™ve never been on a cruise before because of my sea sickness I just get nauseous and sleepy like it didnā€™t even work in a kayak though I am kinda surprised you didnā€™t consider continuing the story weather they got Covid-19 or whatever or if they were safe or even did they get back home and find dad cheated on there mom or did they sister and mom find out that they were both pregnant from the cruise ship and then maybe do a epilogue a couple years later that had them going on a cruise together with the kids that they created during quarantine on the ship or in the hotel since you truely never said if they had birth control or anything since they really couldnā€™t say hey we need condoms and they probably wouldā€™ve been asking questions at that point since you never specified were her husband and there father was so I assume you were planning on writing more and that they both became pregnant with her son baby and they sister her brother baby

midatlstorymanmidatlstoryman6 months ago

Should've stopped at the cruise ship. Couldn't get past 1/2 way into page 2.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Pity Carla is a single mum otherwise

the adventure could continue with a shocked dad

and

further exiting extended family adventures

Excellent first part a bit repetitive in the second

Nevertheless original work

Head609RamHead609Ram3 months ago

Very well written and organized. This is a very orgasmically, incestuous, captivating story. Keep me rigid, great work.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The first part of the story was amazing.so damn sexy.. the second part was a let down an ruined it abit.learn when to stop. Solid 5 oit of 5 if it ended after the cruise. The rest felt like a boxer well past his prime trying to continue fighting for the money and getting pounded. Made a 5 star story a 2.5 overall

GofannonGofannonabout 1 month ago

Very good story! Very arousing. Rather than reading the story straight thru, I would read enough to stroke to an orgasm, then continue later for some more. That gives three or four satisfying sessions instead of one! :)

NotunskilledNotunskilled19 days ago

Lost me with the ruined orgasms and all that shit. Cruise chapter was great, but damn did this take a hard turn.

Fireplace10Fireplace108 days ago

Great story, but way too redundant! But definitely a 5+ stars.

LeB

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...

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