All Comments on 'Cruise to Remember'

A lot of shortcuts were taken to get Sweetie in the stateroom with her fantasy Bull and into action. The detailing of the sex was very hot, once the unlikely pairing was achieved. However, there were several people along the way (BFF and Hubby) who ended up seeming to be there just to make the pairing seem somewhat plausible.

3*

That is one really silly cuck story. Wife is a too willing whore.

I'm not trying to criticize, but not having read anything by this author before. Leads me to believe a man is writing this story. It is a good story, don't me wrong, but for one, there's to many inconsistencies to make this believable. In fact, this sounded kind of like a movie script where a single explosion will go off three or four times to make a point. This chapter could have been ended with one page.

Cuck and voyeur are redundant descriptions.