All Comments on 'Cruising Ch. 02'

Pretty good stuff... %

I don't know how you manage to balance so great of conflict with the characters. I wish I could meet my Von, without my husband killing me! 5* and worth every one!

this is a fine example of a repressed homosexual fantasy. Your next step is to come out of the closet and stop living in denial.

Nice story, but you stopped too soon. Lots of potential for further chapters. For example, the date on Friday. Was her husband reading bedtime stories to the kids while their mom was getting fucked by "uncle Ron". Or even when they invited him to the birthday party, did her mom get wet and wanted to know if he had a brother etc.

So much potential

A good story with a lovely ending.

I'm going to masturbate now.

You're right. I could conjure up more - Kathy fucking Von while Gary tucks the kids in, Mom discovering the secret and wanting to indulge herself, the pregnancy test, Gary's first tattoo and his growing involvement, etc. But it takes many long hours to write these stories, and judging by the sparse votes and comments, there's not that much interest among readers.

This story i s unbelievable on all levels.. no way would any MAN put up with his wife bullshit and disrepect.

Clever and well written. Not just they met and fucked. Love Kathy and Von!!!

Will another chapter be out on her explaining the tattoo at her father's 60th birthday bash, and the black baby in 3 months

Great Story, could def. see some more chapters.

Congratulations!!!!

Great story. I just wrote you a longer private feedback with some of my thoughts. Keep up the good work!

I got your feedback and liked some of your ideas. I might work some into a story some day. Thanks!

I know it takes time to write a story like this. I enjoyed it. Please keep up the good work. A 5+

nice story but there's no way I'd stay with a married woman who f**** around and get pregnant. Being black has nothing to with it. Like I said, nice story.

von would be dead and the cunt would be working in a mexican whore house with a tattoo on her face ,so all the scum bags that come to fuck her in all her hols know that she is a cheating scum bagwhore ..................................

I was hoping Gary would grow a set and leave the ship in Mexico, without letting anyone know or explaining himself to anyone, and fly home. The aftermath of that (his sudden disappearance) would have been interesting.

Excellent in all aspects! I love that it progressed to Gary doing cleanup, him enjoying his wife taking Von, pregnancy with a biracial child. Not going to lie, I would like my wife to do what Kathy did.