All Comments on 'Cruising with Stepmom Pt. 04'

Few errors in the writing but 5plus stars.

Hannah needs to hook up with Brad and Jen

again and I was hoping you would introduce

Hannah into the story and really enjoyed it was

a threesome.

More please . Maybe another story of Brad and

Hannah dating with occasionally having a Jen

and or her roommate threesome🤔

Dude, that was very ho. Great writing and amazing content

I read all four parts of this story and I have to say the writing improved over the course of the series. I think there could be some more parts of you wanted, but it’s not necessary. One critique however is the story could’ve benefited from one more round of close editing, I noticed a word or two missing that interrupted the flow. Overall good description without getting bogged down in repetitive details.

Truly a story with more than one happy ending.

I think the perfect end would have been if Brad and Hannah started dating in an somewhat Open Fashion leaving room for Mommy to still get her rocks off with both off them or only her Step Son If

needed and they end up getting married. And on the Wedding Night Hannah and Jen surprise him with another Cruise for 2 Weeks only for the 3 of them because Dad and the Brother have another big project XD (because fuck em). But with the added Twist that both off them wanna get pregnant with a baby from Brad.