All Comments on 'Cry Little Sister Ch. 02'

Maybe not as steamy as the first chapter, but still thoroughly engaging. I hope you continue: It's nice having something to look forward to.

Your really good....Keep writing cause i cant wait to see what happens next :):)

Madam, you have warmed my heart this morning! I have been watching for this since the last chapter. I personally cannot wait to read about the first time big brother sees these two together! I was okay with the lack of steamy in this chapter. The story line is perfect. Oh, and who wouldn't love a guy wanting to break his leg before games on the road for you! Lol. Thanks again for making my morning!

Wonderful. Tender & funny, well written. Look forward to reading more of your work

Your writing is like a great gourmet meal after trying to stay full for weeks on nothing but cotton candy and jelly beans. More please.

Jason is going to flip when he finds out. No brother wants his best friend banging his sister. But they are so great together!! I love it!

Keep going, I want to take this journey!!!

I'm looking forward to the fireworks when Jason finds out who his sister's seeing :)

This is just beautiful. I love how the story is progressing, and at just the right pace. Thank you for another lovely chapter. :)

What can I say, its better then the first and driving me to the next. Thanks - Kevin

at a guess, and i swear i havent read ahead, im gonna say rory is that o'brian guy.

You should have paired her with Kennal instead of the horndog Rory!!!