All Comments on 'Cry Little Sister Ch. 05'

You write bloody fantastic stories I’ve read all 6 just love hockey stories please keep it up and get chapter 6 done

Appreciate the effort you put into this story. Sorry for whatever happened to your life that you couldn't finish it. Stories like this are why I wish Lit had an option for us readers to flag a story unfinished after some time so others will be forewarned. But what you have left us is brilliant.

Some great characters. The interplay a bit over the top but real enough. Any reader wishes to be in a relationship with so much life in it.

Seriously, you left this hanging!!

Are you sure you wanted Jill in the military because she is scared of the ferris wheel, she's a heavy sleeper and she is cowardly when speaking her truth!!

Rather than waste time, should have had them open up at the baby shower with Casey and Jason

Waiting, patiently, we are.

This has been a great story so far. It is a shame you did not finish it. Dare I hope you get back to it even if it is a decade later?

So chapter 6 is going to take a while?:?? I would really like you to define "{a while" 12 years is your a while???

So far I have enjoyed the story, especially how this chapter ended. However, I would so much like to know when the next chapter(s) are coming.

A wonderul story so far, but no final chapter as promised. I know you said you had computer problems but this is taking it to extremes. I hope you are OK. The fact you have submitted no other stories has me genuinely worried as I am sure an author as talented as you would have more tales with which to entertain us. I hope all goes well with you.

What happens next? Being a hockey nut, and a Desert Storm/VietNam vet, I would truly like to know how it all turns out.

Omgggggg!!!!! I need to read more!

You’re a wonderful writer. This is a story I’d buy in book form.

Looking forward to reading 📚 the next installment!

Will love conquer all? Good writing, keep it up.

and then ...

I've taken to going to the end of the last chapter and reading the comments just to prevent getting invested in a story with no ending.

It was great. I hope you are OK.

I am begging you to please finish this. It was so good and then just left hanging. SOMEONE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!

7yrs later & chapter 6 not completed.

This is why I stopped reading multi-chapter stories. ☹️

Otherwise it was great.

It's been awhile since your last chapter. Please continue. I found this story on the site and couldn't stop until I read all of it. 5* Thanks for your time and efforts.

Seriously, it’s time for that next chapter. At least one more if not two. I loved this!

I love this story. When are you going to finish it

Enjoyed what I read but aaaarrrrrgggghhhhh

5 years and no chapter six

Frustrated.

What can I say that I have not said before.You better be becoming a writer for your career. I love your stories so much and you are my favorite writer. Please never stop writing. Now you just have to find a match for the rest of the single people on the team. Also your editor did a great job, however they did miss a few spelling/word mistakes. All in all I love your writing so much please never stop.

It may be five years since the last one was posted but I sill hope for chapter 6 all the time.

I love this series but Its been more than enough time.please post ch-6.

I love this story please hurry up with ch6

Come on pleaseeeee.

Please finish the story!!!

You truly suck for abandoning this story!!!!! Sooooo disappointed you didn't finish it!!!!!

You are such a good writer, and would be one of the best on this sight if you didn't leave your readers hanging... This story is amazing and deserves to be brought to a satisfying finish. I cannot wait for Jill and Rory to put Jason in his place by telling him that they are in love and he should have no problems with that since it's not some kind of casual sex or using each other...

Seriously! Please finish. I rated all 5 stars and then oops, no ending! Please finish!

You've left Jill sitting terrified for 3 (three) years. Don't You think it's time to help her getting on with her life?

It's a wonderful story with great characters! Please!

Hope all is well.

A huge fan

It would be nice if these authors would refrain from posting stories until they're done with them not write as they go. It's so frustrating to read it Ch5 and be left hanging this long!

Yet another writer on here that don't finish their stories!

This is why I don't like reading series stories until the last one is posted.

U cant leave it like that. We have to know what happens?

She is going to be adding to the story, as of now. Because she just shoved me into the fic and I cannot just have this freaking cliffhanger! In about five minutes I'm going to be shoving the laptop into her lap and she will be writing again. So, you're welcome!

and as everyone else has pointed out, no update for 2 1/2 years; what a shame. You said that ch 6 was going to take awhile, but really!!! What the heck happened, guess that "life got in the way".

Hope that all is well for you & yours

DKP

I'm going to pee my pants if this story isn't finished! It's so good. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!

Finish your story!

Another writer that can't finish their story!

Please tell me there is another chapter...

PLEASE, finish this story!!!! (And write more)

It just got real. I can't wait for the next chapter. -DC

i agree with the rest, its amazing and i love your work but please conclude it.

SOON ;D write more

Good story, but you need to finish it.

I have been reading Literotica for 14 years; this is the best story so far! Then you go off for 2 years, your killing me.... Slowly!

FINISH your story, STOP ignoring your fans and at least tell us if you're going to continue.

Of all the stories i have read on this site, I am hooked to this one more than ever. I just cant wait! You better come up with the next part soon!!

Where's the rest of it? Once again I seem to have gotten myself hooked on a story that has no ending.

Please finish.

Continue!!!! Pleaseeee

I'm so so hooked to this story;please do continue LOL

that this story isn't finished. I was also hoping you would write one for Kellan too. I hope you come back and finish...please!

It would be amazing if you finished this! Please!!

Sincerely,

A huge fan

This was awesome but i hate how you said that you said that it will take awhile but you posted this in 2011 but it is now 2013! It doesn't take that long. Plus a lot of people have been waiting for a long time!

I almost screamed out loud at the end when I read her brother's texts. I can't wait to read what happens next, I love this story!

Is this going to continue? So typical of most of the writers on here with great stories, they stop writing and not even a word about it continuing, not even on their bio.

Will be playing with my ECHL team during the lockout. Will be totally looking at him in a different light when I watch him play tomorrow night @ the teddy bear toss. Go Everblades (goddess knows we needed him)!

I keep checking whenever I get on this site to see if you've put up a new chapter....such a sad day when I see that you have not...People don't forget!!! lol Please post something soon if you have it!

Too many authors do this to me I fall I love with their characters and their story and they don't finish it I have a million different endings in my head and I want to know were the author was going.

Please come back and let us red the last chapter of this story I need to know what happens to rory

continue writing again! I'm dying to know what happens next!

This is one of the better story lines I have seen here, you can't let it hang.

Hope to see you finish this story

I am hoping you finish this some day. I know your twitter account mentioned last hockey season. With lockouts looking, can we try for next year? I hope all is well in your world, and it's just writers block.

I can make my own ending, but I would prefer yours. Thank you again for such a great story! Val

I'm addicted and need more!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep this story going!!!!!!!

Aww I guess this story might not get finished its been a while. I had really hoped you would finish it its an amazing story with a great cliff hanger.

Will you ever finish this? PLEASE WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Please finish this story! I'm totally hooked!!

Only am awesome story could keep me reading till 4 in the morning. I am begging you to please finish it!

please finish it...

This is the second time I have read this series and it is wonderful. I am hoping that you are able to finish this series. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing with us

Both your stories are amazing! Please don't leave us in suspense! It's killing me to know what happens between Jill and Rory now that Jason knows! Please please please finish this.

please finish tis story...waiting for the end

I have been loving your stories, and really want to know what happens next. This is a great story (loving Rory!) and can't wait to see what happens next. Please, please, please finish it :-)

Rushette, you're an amazing writer. Please finish this, or at least start writing and posting something else. I miss you in my life.

Pretty please continue to write this story...

i am absolutly dying to figure out how it ends

Pretty pretty pretty please?

You have to finish this! Thanks for the great read.

Don't stop here your killing me waiting for the next chapter of this

You are so talented. This chapter, especially, really shoked me. The ending really had me. I was at a coffe shop with my boyfriend when I had to let a squel out. Haha, you just needed to be there. ANYWAYS, please continue with your writting, you're too good to stop.

You make me squee, Rushette. That's all I have to say.

please please please

Nice story so far!

More more moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is absoloutely amazing!!!! Please get the next one out ASAP!!!!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

Hope you get around to finishing the story. And I hope it might take more than one additional chapters.

My goodness this was by far the best romance story I've read. PLEASE write more!!!

You have to finish this story. I've been reading this story line ever since Casey's Valentine and I have to know what happenes. Don't keep us hanging out there. Please finish the story.

Fuck me this is BRILLIANT!

It's a really good story. I need to know what hapens next. Please post chapter 5, as soon as possible.

OH. SHIT! all I can say to that!

I can't wait for more! Excellent story so far! When can we expect More???

Finish this story!! It's too good not to.

loving the storey can wait for more

I am totally hooked on this story!! Can not wait for more yet I do not want it to end!!!

im hooked to this storie i still cant beleive the cliff hanger !!! its amazing !!

I have literally just read this whole story (and I should be working) I am loving it & I can not wait for the next chapter - hope to see it soon :)

Great story, I hope finish it.

Please come back! Your story is amazing. Can't wait to read the rest!

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!

an utterly beautiful story. Thank you so much.

You can't stop there! More please. Soon!

Please come back, i love this story. I want to know how the love story ends.