All Comments on 'Crystal and Nicole Ch. 01'

Hot story. Can't wait to hear who the other couple are.

you should delete the first part and begin with the girls getting ready for him to come home. the beginning was a waste of time since the rest of the story was then a flashback ruining any chance of a surprise. always start at the beginning and work forward it is easier to read and keep the suspense going unlike flashbacks.

anyone want to bet that it is Daddy?

This is literotica, in the incest/taboo section. Of course they're going to have sex. Love the starter, both the first section and this chapter.

To those that are wondering who the other people are. READ THE STORY! At the beginning you will see that it is Ashley and Roger!

Great story. Your choice to start in the middle and work back gave much to anticipate, and it payed off well. Please keep it coming.

WHAT A GOOD LEAD INTO A GREAT SERIES.

Can't wait to see what happens next.Please continue soon.

Bullshit; you can't buy your way into Oxford/Cambridge, not even if you were emperor of the western world; academic excellence only gets you past the doors. England is not America, you can't buy your way into the university system, only earn your way in. Check your facts

A real shitfuck of an attempt at storytelling. No lead-up at all. The story begins with the whorish twins in bed with their brother.