Cuckold Birthday Present More Equal

When I first read the story Cuckold Birthday Present by upswing, the original found here.

I was totally into the story and got turned on. Then I read the part where Marla tries to eat her cake and have it too. She tries to get a double bonus of a car and her way with her husband Dave. I didn't care for that and came up with an alternative story ending.

I tried to contact the author upswing, but since the story is over 10 years old and the only submission by this author, I did not get a response and consider it abandoned. If he/she objects to my version, I will immediately remove it.

I have left the bulk of the story intact up to what I, as the husband Dave, would have answered my wife. Taking a cue from another recent authors take on a story he would have rewritten, I have made my changes in itlaics so the reader can see the difference. I believe my version leaves both husband and wife on equal and loving ground.

This is not my story just a different, kinder twist to it

I'm not a pro and have only a few stories printed but I give it my best and try to make sure at least everything is spelled correctly.

My husband Dave and I had been married for 25 years. We were both 48, still attractive and healthy. And our sex life was still good, even if it had fallen into a routine after all those years. Dave's sex drive was always higher than mine, and I tried to keep him happy the best I could, but I always knew he wanted a little more.

Shortly before his 49th birthday, he said he would like to spice up our sex life, and he said he had some fantasies he would like to try before he got too old to do them. Dave said he had a little game we could play, and to give me incentive he would buy me a new car if I went along. Well, that got my attention since my car was starting to get old, and I could really use a new one. I asked him what the game was. He said the rules were simple. He would make a list of 52 things he wanted to do, and I would have to choose one thing from the list every week and do it. I thought about it for a while and said I would have to see the list before I said yes.

Dave spent the entire weekend working on the list and he gave it to me Sunday night. I went through the list one by one. Dave was always asking me to be more dominant because he said he wanted to be submissive with me, so there were a lot of things on the list dealing with these kinds of things. He also liked being tied up and doing some mild S & M, but most of all he liked it when I was in charge to do what I wanted with him. I went through the list and knew I could do all of them except one. All it said was "Cuckold me". I couldn't believe he wanted me to have sex with someone else! I hadn't had sex with anyone outside our marriage, and now he was asking me to. Sure, I had my share of guys before we got married, but Dave always kept me quite satisfied sexually. Then I got to thinking of how turned on Dave would get when we had sex, and he would start talking about how he would like to see me take another guy, but I didn't think he would want me to actually do it. I figured it was always going to be just a fantasy.

I went to Dave and told him I would say yes to the game if he took the "cuckold me" off the list. He said he had thought about it a long time and he said the thought of having sloppy seconds and having me be a "Hot Wife" for a night turned him on beyond belief. He also told me he masturbated frequently with that thought in his mind. So he said if I wanted the car, it would have to be the whole list. I told him I would give him an answer in the morning.

After a sleepless night thinking about it, I figured I would make that the last thing I would do, and in a year I figured he would drop it and give me the point if it came down to the time of actually doing it. When we got up in the morning I told him I would play the game.

The year went by quickly, and it was turning out to be a fun game for me, and I methodically checked off a point each week. There was only 4 points to go, and one of the things on the list was to sign up on one of those adult friend finder sites, and have cybersex with someone. I knew it was anonymous, so I figured it would be harmless. I met a guy online who was 38, had a great body, and his pictures showed he was very well endowed. We got to flirting, and the next thing you know he got me so wet that I had to adjust how I was sitting. Wow! I couldn't believe how horny that made me. We kept in contact and had more cybersex for the next couple of weeks. Then he asked me if I wanted to hook up for real. I was so horny I just about said yes right then, but I said I would get back to him shortly. The timing of it was unreal. With only one point left, which was to cuckold my husband, here was this guy asking me to go to bed with him. Just a year ago I didn't want to do it, and now I was getting hot just thinking about it. I wanted to give Dave one last chance to back out of it, but I knew I had to choose my words carefully, so I decided to write him a note so I would have time to think about what I was going to say. It was Sunday, and Dave's birthday was next Saturday. I wrote the note and handed it to him as he walked out the door to go to work Monday morning. I could only imagine how hard it was going to be for him to concentrate on work that day after he read my note which said:

Dear Dave,

I love you with all my heart. You do everything I need to be sexually satisfied. As you know there is only one thing left on the list, and that is to cuckold you. I have made arrangements to meet a man I met on the internet for Friday night. I'm giving you one last chance to give me the point without me having to actually go through with it. I have put a lot of time and effort this past year to earn the points to win the car, so I WILL have sex with him if you don't "give" me the point. Remember, this was your idea, but I'm going to raise the stakes for you, so you better give what I'm about to say careful attention. You are about to open Pandora's Box. I will take another man because YOU want me to, and that's the only way I can win the car. But what if I end up liking it? You couldn't expect me to make it a onetime deal now could you? Well, I have fantasies that I would like to make reality too, so if you make me go through with this, you will have to play my game for the next year. The rules are simple, but you must do ALL of them, no exceptions, just like you're making me do.

Rule #1: Every Saturday for the next year, you will become my submissive slave to do whatever I ask of you for the whole day. The rest of the week will be normal except if I use the phrase "Witch Mountain", which would mean you would become my submissive slave until I released you.

Rule #2: I will be in complete control of your orgasms for the next year. I know how much you like to masturbate, so to make sure you won't be able to, you will wear a chastity belt from the time you get out of the shower, to the time you go to bed. I will allow you one orgasm a week, of which I will control how you get to cum. To make sure that you do as I say in Rule #1, the penalty for not doing what I tell you to do, would be that I wouldn't allow you to have an orgasm that week. So you better be prepared to do what I tell you to do, or you could have blue balls for a long time!

Rule #3: After I allow you to have an orgasm, you will clean up all the mess with your mouth and swallow every last drop of it. You see, I have been doing a lot of research on the internet about female domination, and the common theme is that after their submissive has cum, the Mistress makes them eat all their cum, so that is what you will have to do too.

Rule #4: I will be able to have sex with anybody I choose, whenever I choose. After I have sex with someone, you will be made to clean up their mess with your mouth. Hey, you've wanted me to be your Mistress for a long time now, so you better be prepared to be a good little submissive. I want you to know that I would never become emotionally involved with someone else because I wouldn't want to put our marriage at risk. It would be purely for the sex.

Now, are you sure you still want me to cuckold you Friday Night? You still have time to just give me the car and we can go back to our "normal" life, but if you make me cuckold you, then my game begins Saturday at 12:01 A.M., and yes, Rule #4 will be in effect, and you will be made to suck out all my lovers fresh cum from my well used pussy! You have until Friday morning when you leave for work to make your decision. You can either tell me I get the car without having to cuckold you, or you can put on the chastity belt that I will leave in your drawer, and come to me so I can put on the lock that I have. Once I put on the lock, there is no turning back. I have learned a lot of things about being a Mistress, and you might be getting more than you bargained for. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

P.S. One of my fantasies I learned from one of the female domination sites on the internet is where the Mistress makes her submissive give another guy a blowjob while another guy fucks him in the ass. That gets me hot just thinking about you being sandwiched between 2 guys!

Love You,

Marla

I really wanted to lay it on heavy because I was sure he wouldn't make me go through with cuckolding him if he knew what my game was. I really didn't think I would make him do something with another guy, but he didn't know that. Dave is not the least bit interested sexually in other guys, and there were times when we had sex that he would pretend to be someone else and he would tell me he wanted to eat "his" cum from my pussy, but he always backed out of doing it after he had an orgasm. I asked him one time after one of these encounters why he didn't go through with it, and he said he lost all his "willpower" after he had an orgasm. I was sure he wouldn't want to play my game, and the car would be mine! Don't get me wrong, the idea of having sex with someone else had kind of grown on me over the last year, and inside I was pretty excited about the idea, but my sensible side told me it was best to keep sex strictly inside the marriage. In the off chance that Dave did agree with my game, I wanted to make him feel like it was all his doing, which it was, but I was ready to take full advantage of using my husband as the submissive he said he wanted to be.

The week dragged on as I nervously waited for Dave's decision. I was just sure he would give me the car, but I had to be prepared if he didn't. I didn't really believe my husband would do the things I said he would have to do, but it wouldn't take long to find out because I had a date with Ken tonight.

I woke up when Dave went into the shower and I found his letter to me.

Marla,

My darling, wonderful, sexy, beautiful wife,

I love you with all my heart. But, you cannot change our deal. You have worked so hard and did so well on the list, it would be a shame to throw it away on the last point. We did have some great sexy fun didn't we?

So here is my counter:

Rule #1: I accept the Saturdays and to be your submissive slave even on weekdays. But there needs to be a safe word.

Rule #2: You can control my orgasms only on Saturdays and "Witch Mountain" days. We currently have sex 2-3 times a week now. That will not change. When that continues I will have no need to masturbate anymore. I still get to make love to my wife during the week as usual.

I have read extensively on chastity belts. They can be harmful and very painful if not properly used. They can even cause "shrinkage of the penis" over time and neither one of us wants that. I will not wear it outside of the house. What if I get into a serious accident and go the hospital. They find that and need to spend valuable time to find a tool to remove it. It could be VERY costly. Not to mention the embarrassment.

I agree to your Rule #3

Rule #4: NO. You will not be able to have sex with anybody you choose whenever you choose. The choice of stud will be yours, but not whenever, and he will be carefully tested for diseases. Once a week is the maximum. And never the same stud back to back. I believe this WILL put our marriage at risk otherwise. This rule is to insure that you will not be emotionally involved.

Tonight is the ONLY night you will be alone with another man. It will be at a hotel and not at his home. After that if we agree to continue, it will be as an EQUAL threesome, you, me, and your stud, not as a cuckold. I told you, this cuckold thing is a onetime experience.

Rule #5: There will NEVER be any verbal humiliation. The words pathetic, wimpy, faggot, tiny, small dick, etc. will never be used. You will not ever compare me and your stud in any way. I never want to hear how much bigger, better or has given you the best orgasm ever. The same goes for him too. The first time it happens, THIS IS DONE!

Rule #6: Your ass is mine only. We need to keep something for our marriage that is only between us, husband and wife.

I love you will all my heart, mind, soul and body. I never want that to change or for this to destroy our marriage. I want this for US. Your experience and mine. I know you have spent time and energy planning for this and I am wondering which one of us wants this more, YOU or me.

If YOU agree to this, meet me when I come out of the bathroom after I shower with the most loving, sexy, passionate kiss you have. Then I will know it begins.

Just to show you how much you mean to me and that I will abide by the rules, I will put on the cage when I get home from work and send you a video of me locking it, to your phone to show I have complied with your wishes.

Tomorrow we will talk all of this through and set new rules for us both. Have fun tonight, enjoy yourself. I'll be waiting. Be home before midnight.

P.S. to your P.S. How do you know I will not enjoy this and it turns me gay and want it more often with or without you?!! ;-)

Love you more,

Dave

I was shocked! He had a counter offer but still wanted to go through with it.

When he stepped out of the bathroom I ran up to him and gave him the most steamy, long kiss I could. I had to wipe both of our faces off after that.

I looked up at him and asked' "Are you sure you want to do this?"

He said he had thought about it constantly all week and he tried to do everything he could to talk himself out of it, but he said it made him more excited than he had ever been in his whole life. I said I WILL make you do EVERYTHING I told you about in our game. I want to hear you say that you are willing to do everything I tell you to do in our game". I was still trying to talk him out of it, but inside I was getting really excited about what I now knew was going to happen. He looked at me and said "I am willing to follow all the rules in our game." I couldn't believe what I was hearing. I didn't really believe my husband would do the things I said he would have to do, but it wouldn't take long to find out because I had a date with Ken tonight. I had no choice but to get the lock and cage from my drawer and place it on his dresser. I said "O.K., let the game begin." With that, he got dressed, gave me a long kiss and left for work. I sat there on the bed for a long time thinking about what just happened, and what was going to happen. If this is what he wanted, I was going to give him all he bargained for, and more, and I was going to enjoy watching him squirm when he had to actually do the things I was going to tell him to do. I was going to see how far I could push his limits, and then I would stretch them. He had no idea of the thoughts running through my head of what I was going to make him do, and I was going to enjoy making him do them! I sat there on the bed for a long time thinking about what just happened, and what was going to happen. His changes to my rules I thought were fair and loving.

I called in sick to work because I knew there was no way I would be able to concentrate, and I had some planning to do. The day dragged on, and later that afternoon I sent Dave a text, and told him to do something after work and come home at 9:00, and there would be a note waiting for him, and he was to do what it said. I planned on leaving before he got home, because I knew if I saw him I might back out. I was supposed to meet Ken at 10:00 at a local hotel that is only a few blocks from where I live, and I planned on leaving a little early so I could go to the bar and have a couple of drinks for some liquid courage. I took a long bath, shaved, and trimmed up my pubic hair so there was only a small, neat patch remaining. After my bath, I put on the outfit I was going to wear. It consisted of some designer stockings with a garter belt, 4 inch black pumps, a sheer black shirt that you could clearly see my nipples through, a short skirt, and a jacket. I put on my best perfume, and I decided not to wear a bra, so Ken could have easy access.

Before I left the house, I put the note by the front door for Dave to see when he got home and told him to put on the cock cage now, send a pic of it, and then read the note fully, along with the picture I took of myself dressed up in the outfit I was wearing, and a picture I had printed of Ken's cock. I knew after he saw the pictures, Dave would get instantly hard, but since he had the chastity belt on, he wouldn't be able to! This was getting fun already, knowing Dave was going to be so horny, and there was nothing he could do about it. The note gave him instructions to shave everything from his neck down (except for his arms). I had read that making a man shave would take away some of their macho attitude and make them feel more submissive. At 11:00, he was to light some candles, get into bed and tie his ankles to the rope I had attached to the corners of the bed. Then he was to put the blindfold on that I had left him, and then tie one wrist to the rope I had attached to the other corner of the bed. I told him I would tie his other wrist when I got home. Then he was to lay there waiting for a phone call I would give him when I got to the room with Ken, and if he didn't say a word, I would let him listen to his wife getting fucked by Ken's cock. I finished the note with a last sentence which said: "If you want relief tonight, you will do as I say! I'm going to enjoy fucking Ken's cock, and I'm going to especially enjoy watching you eat all his cum from my well used pussy, and there will be nothing you can do to stop me since you will be tied up! See you tonight."

At 8:45 I left for the hotel. As I entered the bar, I could feel the stares from some of the gentlemen sitting at the bar. I ordered a drink and sat in the corner booth. It wasn't long before one of the men came over to my table and used one of those cheesy pickup lines, but I politely declined, saying I was waiting for someone. At 9:15 I got a video from Dave showing him locking the cage on his cock. I flooded my panties. After a couple of drinks I was starting to feel a little more at ease but still wet, and right on cue, I saw Ken walk in. I called him over to my table and we ordered a drink. He was even more handsome than his pictures showed, and we hit it off right away. There I was, sitting with a good looking guy that was 12 years younger than me, knowing that I was going to have sex with him. I was getting really hot now, and Ken moved over next to me and put his hand on my thigh. I told him what I was going to do to my husband when we were done. Before long he was running his hand up my leg, under my skirt, and he soon found wet panties in his way as he proceeded to finger me under the table. I casually let my jacket fall open so he could get a good look at my braless breasts. I could feel myself building to an orgasm, so I told him we should get a room and do this right. It was now 11:15, and I knew Dave was lying in bed, tied up, and ready for my phone call.