by OldnotDead71
I don’t love my mother that much.. So Carol if you think you’ll get away with it with me. You will be going on a vacation to the Everglades. And Burt and James. I am a United States Marine. What do you think would happen to you.Harvey. And I will give the author. My email address. If you have issues with that. Harvey
this would end in blood and tears in any real life scenario.
most likely in far more blood than tears truth be told
Wow you and your "friends" you write about are sick in the head. Humiliation and disrespect for someone you bastards claim to love is fucked up.
Well so far this is laughable, any one who would sit and take this abuse really needs to reevaluate there life.
It looks like the cats the only one with enough common sense not to get written in to this second chapter of a quagmire of degradation, I hope that this guy grows a set of balls, to pack his bags and create armageddon for her and her cohorts.
She’s the illness and he’s the cure, if not it’s just another gutter cuck story.
You are a very good writer....however this seems to be a fetish story not a loving wives. Also I must say you are an incredibly troll to get the reactions you are getting.
Mainly because it is in the wrong section have to give it a 1 star.
The ending: Steve Asked Carol to get James and Burt to come back, He needed to thank them... But when they came through the door, Steve raised his Glock and put 3 bullets in each mans head, Carol screamed but only for some seconds, then Steve put the gun to his head and fired, when the cops came they found Steve's letter explaining what he had done, Carol was taken to a mental facility and was never released. END OF STORY , the original story gets 1 star, which is more than is should have
You’re a fucking idiot who clearly has been rejected by every woman who knows you, including your own mother.
Undoubtedly, she probably wishes she had an abortion instead of you; but here we are.
Lets start with the statement you wrote “I obviously have the best husband in the world” that may be accurate; but is she the best wife? What does she bring to the marriage?
If the answer is simply abuse and torment, then why remain married? It’s not sex, it’s not her cooking or housekeeping…so what exactly js the reason he hasn’t divorced her?
What is worth putting up with her spousal abuse?
ahh, an anniversary present, oh, my...tease and denial fuels submission into that inevitable downward spiral
More cuckold bullshit tell the couple your writing this for there life's suck and you suck at life
While you write this shit, which do you hold tighter your dick or your pen?
There seems to be a lot of negative feedback judging from the CAT calls this story has generated ! Since this author seems to be more than just a CAT-o-nine-tails , he is currently at 31 , he seems to provoke quite an emotionally charged response , which by my standards is all the proof I need to declare him as an elite artist of the highest caliber ! His stories cause emotional reactions in his readers , who lash out dreadfully with emotionally charged drivel . Getting under the skin is one of the many results a writer would thrive for and this one clearly does that very well ! So I say keep plugging away and hate it or not we will keep reading them !
Make her sleep on the couch. What's she going to do, punch your lights out? Next - the writing is terrible. Bad punctuation and lousy sentence structure. Poor storyline. Post in the correct category. Terrible.
Absolute junk. Didn’t make through the first page. Will not even attempt an additional part.
Humiliation is not my cup of tea, but I understand if someone likes it. the problem with stories like this is that they have a crescendo of humiliations, always the same, which ends up being boring.
I will keep reading hoping to find something new.
Tell your "made-up couple" that I think the idiots seem to be running around freely here and that they just don't want to die out. This author and his "story" prove it to us! And tell them I'm not anonymous and feel free to reply!
I actually like the premise - but, a little too much humiliation aspect for my taste.
I won't read any further chapters. Thank you for your contribution.
The mentally ill who come up with this ridiculous shit really are a special kind of stupid.
Sadly much as I like cuckold stories this just doesn't work. Like one other contributor I will not bother to read any other chapters.
"As for me: as a writer"...Do you really think you are a writer, just because you write about some nonsense bullshit? Really? 1*
This was Alexander was the most narcissistic screwed up written for someone else liberal personal view including there could never be a woman that would be that mean or cruel to rub her husband’s face into her adult related this one has she has to be coolest person I’ve ever seen
This is the most deplorable cuckold story I’ve ever read no development of character just pure evil
What the hell is going on here? Virtually every single story in the category is a bloody pathetic cuck story. So sick of it. I agree with BigJim. Put it in Fetish you sad excuses for men.
This is pure abuse. Nothing consensual. Completely asymmetrical relationship including their 'lifestyle'. There's kink and there is rampant mental and sexual abuse. This is the latter. If OP knows this couple, as he purports to, get Steve some serious help. STAT.
Funniest part of this whole mess: the author and, by extension, the supposed couple who inspired this story, enjoying reading the many negative comments this effort generated.
Because, as you all well know, there's nothing that people love to hear about themselves than that they are, on one hand, a sad pervy, talentless hack and, on another, that they are a bunch of degenerates that should do humanity a favor by deleting themselves.
Yeah - nothing, but good feelings out of people hating your guts.
Not saying it's improbable; just pointing out how truly, hilariously pathetic you got to be to feel this way. If negative validations is all you're looking, why bother wasting your time around here? Go to the big league - Twitter exists! Facebook is right there! Just come out as the freaks you truly are over there, and enjoy the onslaught of put downs you're definitely going to get for it! 😒
But hey - weirdos gotta be weird, I guess...
It’s a word that is so missing from these tales. Dude, man up. Say no. Find a better wife.
No attack for your story but the premise is what throws me. Reading is same as a movie being entertaining but in real life actions is where my reactions would in this case be a violent brutal response to sll involved from day one . I know of a few guys who are married that have participated in various forms of this like open to both if opportunities arise or watching the wife fuck but was always cheating behind her back as far as I knew. I found many hubby’s and wives were cheating often . Many in public acting the happy family but knowing of a few guys that were currently fucking her in the sleziest way possible. I had seen video of woman I knew of them taking a dick up there ass or being facialed. You would want to be mad but know there hubby is also fucking anything he could also. Sad reality that you must hope it’s not your wife doing it. These couples if you didn’t know appeared to have the perfect marriages but eventually the shit hits the fan and the divorce. Add the humiliating this story had and the only way this works is if there is real psychology issues for hubby
Not worth a comment really. Not a great cuckold story; just an abusive relationship. The wife really doesn't love the husband and the husband is too much a fool to leave.
Lmaoooo I hope this is fake as hell. What man would
Let a woman do that to him and then the two idiot lovers smh this is garbage. If it is true then steve needs to buss a cap I. There asses
Degradation is nowhere. Glorying in it is less than human. Where do you fit in?
Stories like this make me want to throw my PC out of the window. I can literally feel the anger building up inside me. Why did I continue? I was hoping for it to turn around. Being submissive I can understand for some people (It's not me) but this is worse than that.
I thought he was going to grow a pair and poison the booze and burn the house down with them in it. But no such luck
This is definitely the WORST story I've read here. Nothing positive to say. Just plain stupid and hateful. Don't ever post another chapter or story.
Well written.
Sad commentary of the husband but does it prove love conquers self respect?