by johnjinglez1
I've already written two more chapters, so you may or may not suffer through them. Sorry you didn't like it! I had a blast writing it.
Looking forward to the next few chapters. I hope you make this into a long series. Personally I would have preferred a 3-4 page chapter with more descriptions.
Ignore the negativity. There will be plenty of people who are going to like this series.
Well written and I like the direction you're heading. Can't wait for the next chapters. Well done.
I liked the story but wished you'd published all three chapters at once instead of this short one page thing.
Some very realistic elements in this story. Many lads spy, sniff panties and jo for mom. Reactions can be vary greatly.
For the feedback everyone, the other chapters are still pending for review. I'm pretty new to the site and wasn't familiar with the format / what would be considered "too long" to digest. I'll make sure to combine chapters next time.
Worried it would be too long? Have you read stories on here? Not only was it too short you wrote through it much like a sprint race. At least in 1 mile races there is some build up but yours was like a sprint. Much like a boy having his first orgasm. Oh what is ooohhhnn done....splat.
I swear if you are 18 or older then that is just sad. If you are under 18 then it makes sense. Either way I do not agree with the other reviews. *
Hi,,,The story is nice even though it`s short,,,this does happen,,,and it can be very exciting to tease someone ,,,,love it myself........
Mom can't cuckold her son. All a cuckold is a man whose white cheats. He isn't her husband and she is not even married anymore. She is dominating her son. He's a submissive and she's pathetic. No reason in backstory for either of them to start acting like this.
This story will need to be continued before I can rate it. At this point, it's a 1 or less!
Cuckold
A man who willingly encourages his wife to sleep with other people because it brings him pleasure. Cuckolds exist on a spectrum between two extremes. One on end is the masochistic cuckold who enjoys humiliations, degradation, and other demeaning activities at the hands of his wife and her lover. The alpha cuckold lies at the opposite end of the spectrum and does not enjoy any form of humiliation and often has a direct say in who his wife sleeps with and when. <source ; Urban Dictionary>
This is NOT a cuckold story, 1 the supposed cuckold is her son not her husband. 2 even if you disregard that fact he has to be WILLING to allow it, wich he does not seem to be either. This runs more along the lines of Domination, and I have to say it is very creepy the way it has started. I am holding judgement till I read more, but right now I think the mom needs therapy and the son need rescuing from her. Oedipus be damned, if this goes the way it seems it will in my opinion its abuse not love. And if incest is from abuse it's wrong. The mom needs help.
You're correct about this not being a cuckold story. A son cannot be cuckolded by his mother. But your definition is also wrong. The term cuckold comes from the cuckoo, who lays her egg in another birds nest, tricking them into raising it. In biology, the term cuckold refers to a husband or mate that unwittingly and unknowingly raises another man's child when his wife has been unfaithful. In common usage, it refers to a husband that has a cheating wife and doesn't know it. In all cases, the husband has no knowledge of his wife's infidelity. You cannot consciously decide to be a cuckold, because, by definition, it refers to a man that has no knowledge of his wife's cheating. Therefore, 90% of all "cuckold" stories are actually not cuckold stories at all, and are mislabeled. You can't decide to be something that requires you to be in the dark about it.
Correct title: Slutty single mother who can't stop whoring herself out to any guy with a cock bigger than her dildo.