All Comments on 'Cultural Exchange Ch. 04'

I've never commented on a story before, I have really enjoyed your work so far. My first thoughts when going through your first chapter would be that it'd be a very basic story, but the way you've developed your world and themes is highly enjoyable. The story is still rough but i can't help but want more of it. Please deliver a new chapter when you can. Cheers.

It just get better and better , keep up the great writing!!! Looking forward to the forth coming chapters!!!! Thank you for a great read!!!!

Thank you for another great chapter to add to your remarkable story.

The Elves will be confused at one moment because in a strange way every enemies became guardians ( Turak and Sha'Zella , now ) , they will consider maybe it's a strange custom an Earth .

I can't wait with enough patience for the next chapter !

I liked this chapter, but how in the world does an assasin get to come back to dream fuck our hero? She gets to scream out her orgasm without getting noticed? No guards or Rayla by his side 24/7?

Don't worry Anon, she will be back. With time, everything falls in its right place.

Story gets better and better. You have a gift and thank you for posting.

Don't let the negative feedback affect you. Just do what you do :)

because magic keeps the noise from leaving the room. She had a necklace that protected her from lightning. Noise suppression magic in some device would be a reasonable assumption, and might be part of her stealth arsenal.

Once the Countess learns that the attempt was not on her, will she relent on implied debt? Only Tenou knows for sure....

I'm surprised he's not used his martial arts from earth. Based on what I've read of what he knows, it almost sounds like he's got some rudimentary MMA training. That would definitely serve him well vs future assaults since any opponents would have no defense against it unless they observe him for sometime.

Ive also been wondering on something since the previous chapter when the A'Jin trainer mentioned the other person from his/our world in his domain. How would they react to a dedicated pacifist?

I need another hit, NOW . dang story pushers, getting you hooked. great story, am loving it, the characters, and the relationships.

there's just so little of it...and I gladly spend it reading your works

your writing has gotten so much better,a good editor makes all the difference in the way the story is read and played out. i give it two thumbs up. keep up the good work tenou

Awesome story.... Great work.

Great series. Very well written, will continue to read this series! Thanks for sharing Tenou, hope to read more soon!

.. .. story teller you are, thanks I give you.

Awesome story.... Please keep going!

Very much looking forward to the rest of the story.

I could see this easily extending to book length. I hope you'll continue to expand on it.

Any update on another chapter???

Chapter 5 is developing rather slowly due to health issues combined with my need to resolve some legal problems concerning my father's recent demise

Sorry for your loss

Your story is awesome found it in early December and honestly have already read it twice all the way through. Can not wait for the next chapter. Im sorry for your loss as well

Very captivating right to the end. I read all four chapters in one go. I couldn't stop myself, cant wait for the next chapter, deeply sorry for your loss.

New update, new life matters.

My editor is on holidays. I hope he has a great time,he deserves it.

I'm happy and proud to announce that my brother's been recently father to a beautyful pair of twin girls.

Chapter 5 lost,i'm rewriting it. There has been a failure in the electric supply that has burned many eltronics in my house,among them my computer. Right now i'm working from an even older one. I just hope the compensation is good enough to buy a new PC :P

I've been coming back here fo months looking for chapter 5... I just can't help it.

Thank you for coming back, and congratulations to you brother :D

I'm begging you. Write a new chapter and give me something to read...wonderful story btw!!

Please post another chapter I have been waiting months for you to continue this great story.

Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to see how you expand on it. Best of luck with your rewrites.

OH GOD THIS IS PAINFUL!!

I've lost track of my editor and he doesn't answer my messages.

If things keep going on like this, next monday I'll start the process to look for a new editor.

Tenou, I may not be a great editor, but I'd be willing to run a 'first pass' for you.

Instead of waiting a whole week for an answer from my editor, I've decided to start looking for new help right away.

I have posted it in the Editors' forum and in my Bio; if you think we can work together, put your mail address in a feedback message so I can contact you

As I have stated in my Bio and the forum thread where I asked for an editor, the volunteering process is now closed. Thanks to all of you for offering your help.

You can expect chapter 5 this week or next.

I can't wait to read chapter 5.

Update?

In John Lennon's words: Life is what happens while you try to make another plans.

I've been forced to stop the writing of chapter 5 because we're in time of political ellections in my country and I have my schedule packed with part-time jobs for the different events they're hosting.

Hopefully, I'll be able to retake it starting next week.

So long as you haven't decided to drop the series entirely I'm pleased. I've seen my fair share of series on this site that had gone to a certain point, then just stop: Amy's Smile, Medusa being the 2 at the top of my personal list

I love the story development and the way that your characters are a mosaic of a personality rather than the narrow one dimensional characters that are seen in many online stories.

Keep writing and take your time you are a tremendous author.

Great story, been looking forward to the next chapter coming out

Great story, I really like it but it's been a while could we get a status update?

Hey Tenou you still alive? Could use an update this is one of my favorite series.

What if the assassins targeted tenou because he was a important political figure?!?!?!

DON'T BE ASSASSINATED TENOU!!!!!

I hope Tenou's politics stuff is getting to the point where he can come back and post the next chapter this is awesome series

Chapter 5 sent for final editing

booyah final editing

I just opened this to check if you had said anything about possibly continuing, and you have! Keep up the great work!

Where is Ch.5 submitted? I can't see it on your page.

The post said submitted. That just means it is now with the lit admins. It usually takes anywhere from 6 hours to a week, depending on the length of the story and how busy they are. The a fore mentioned post was yesterday, and none of tenou's previous chapters have been too terribly long. Patience padawan... patience.

So I read this again to refresh my memory. So glad I did! I see I gave you 5 stars but for the life of me I can't recall why I didn't comment on your wonderful work! Well, better late than never. Your depiction of their conjugal love was beautiful and made clear the importance of solemnity and ceremony to demark one's change in status when married. Bravo!

All of them will be fun.

What a journey we are on.

thank you

That was really intense. Intrigue, action, sexiness, it was all there. Dynamite.

So good!!

Excellently done, I thoroughly enjoyed this episode and hope it continues. Thank you for sharing.