All Comments on 'Cultural Exchange'

Loved it, even they mystery of the shower partner. Keep up the great writing.

hope you write a follow up to this.

Great story. Nice pacing and a nice way to switch back and forth between different points ofview,

Well done. Thanks

Need a little justice on Simon, Izzy & the other bullies! Mr Martin needs to be smacked around as well for not doing his job well/fairly.

"As ever, his emotions were torn - waiting for the abuse, but still thrilled she was next to him." This line bothers me a lot. First, there aren't that many people who are crushing around on bullies and those who do some sort of masochists. Basically, MC seems to have issues with his self-esteem, due to which he is going after someone who would abuse him. It doesn't really endear him to me. The same issue is in the story 'love lessons'. If you could somehow make them fall in love in the course of narration, but without MC having a crush on his abusers from the beginning, that would be great. I mean, a pretty face is a pretty face but with such a bitchy personality, can anyone outside of their circle really like them?