All Comments on 'Culvert Mozart Lane Ch. 02'

Wanted to give it a full score but too much missing about his relationship with his wife and how they were doing while he was having sex with Jake’s wife 4*

Chap 1 was good, but you lost it completely here.

So far so good.

I am giving 3 *** for the stories as is, and will reconsider both when the story comes to the end.

Thank you.

You’re a master of detail and a master storyteller. I can find no fault with this story in the slightest. Excellent 5 stars and a standing ovation

What the fuck did I just read?

@Demosthenes384bc - There is much more about his wife 'Elaine' in future chapters. Just have a little patience.

I'll read some more!

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