All Comments on 'Cum for Class'

A brilliant little story. Has all the elements,,,, fantasy, urgency and gratification. Well done.

needs another chapter

Great story! I hope you got some following chapters planned!

Another chapter would be good

More i hope?

This deserves a sequel

Completely agree this would do great with another chapter or so.

Mother needed cum for experiment, her daughter ask her brother the mom son to help her out because she left the sample at home. The brother/son produces but the mom suspects that the two got together.

Not a bad story. Got any more chapters in you?

If I were the bro...

I'd hope that Sis's project lasted all semester--maybe all year long. :)

My sister used to do this to me all the time in high school, never in college. Except it wasn't for any experiment or anything. It was after she would break up with her boyfriend. I guess it was so she could get some kind of approval of what a good job she was doing.

I do have to admit. She was quite good at this and I would secretively want to meet with her boyfriends so I could break them up.

Surprised in the errors considering how well one of your other stories were well written and that was a lot longer. ***

Great premise.

But did it have to be in a rush? Did it have to be in ladies' room stall?

Better at home. If he was nervous, so be it, she could have "helped" him in s many ways: visually by bring her breasts could be a first step. Discussin what kind/s of sexual activities he liked could be another. Asking if he ever thought about her while masturbating? What did he think about?

Maybe discussing what porn he watched. What kind did he get off to the best? Maybe watching together while she played with his cock and balls to help him get hard -- if he couldn't on his own? Playing with herself while he got to watch?

Three stars.

@Anonymous: Thanks for the feedback. Sometimes I do write longer stories, but this time I wanted a quickie. :)

PL. Continue this....! Getting too interested

5 stars - I like this story

Will we get sequel?

.....moooooorree

Thanks for the comments, guys. :)

I don't really like doing multi-chapter stories (tried that once recently and didn't like it). I prefer stories with a beginning and an end. That way, I don't get stuck in that one story, unable to move on to other ones that I want to write. There will be more stories coming, though - some small ones and some longer ones. Stay tuned to my profile. :)

Good premise.

But too rushed. Particularly the blowjob/handjob.

Three stars.

Good premise.

But not enough sexual stimulation.

She's got tits, right? Tease him with them. Ask him if he'd like to see them. Let him feel them, kiss them, suck in them while she teases his cock and balls all preliminary to forcing him to cum.

Three stars.

Meh...

Needs a little bit more. After her weekend is over and she gives her presentation on Monday, she suddenly had time to reflect back on obtaining the sample. She thinks of a few more tests that she would like to run to expand her research, so she has to go back to her brother again for more material. Over time, she realizes that she has developed an emotional attachment to her brother and he has developed feelings for her too.

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This was too dry and clinical. 3/5

wish it was longer,

Plausibly hot! 5 stars. Great short tale.

Bill S.

I had accident burned was wrapped up a mummy, twice a day I had to be bathed brushed paint brush then burn ointment put on and wrapped up again quite painful and wife couldn't do any of it upset her. Her sister a nurse she lots of experience. She was very comfortable at first, I was freaking out because got hard and she was really loving it it turned her on but she made sure that she gave extra care I could feel her hot breathe she would. She started joking with me 2 weeks later that she is going to charge me for the extra attention that she gave me. I said put it on my bill. She said that after 4 weeks that there are test to to see if the outer layer skin coming along. The tests may be pain may be intense but I'm sure you can handle it. The next week Carol my sister in law came in the bedroom like she had from the first time lab coat, bathed me then started pulling skin on my back, chest, my arms and face then my butt cheeks and took an extra longer time on dick and balls. I had sorta had gotten used to being naked and I wasn't getting a hard on. When she was just about finished she stood up and opened her lab coat which she had done before after done, but this time she naked. She she did not say a word it not that hadn't wanted see her I had fantasized about her for years, I tried look away, I wasn’t sure what to say. She said I talked to sis about my fees and she agreed that anytime that wanted so long as she wasn't neglected and that it had to secret. She started kissing me, I was still in a strange state of shock trying to wrap my head around, the only thing I said was ok meekly. The first thing she did was to push me to the bed beside the kissing she wasn't in a hurry she making love to my cock she looked up into my eyes she was smiling with her mouth and throat was full of cock. She was definitely not in hurry. She edged me for a while, I was moaning without even thinking about it I finally said I am going to cum she moaned gooduuud. I am dazed, but I craved for my fantasy was to eating pussy (I'm addicted to eating pussy), but before she let me she started french kissing me it turned on that I was eating some of my cum with her and she smiled at me saying I like snow balling and you are going to be be eating my cum filled pussy my sister says that you are excellent at eating pussy for man. I said anytime you need oral relief call. OK lets start now Tom and I am multi orgasms plus a little bit of squirting. Great Carol I have only met one woman who squirtered it was a real surprise, loved it. As I started working my way down her body sucking her nipples I can taste her hormones and know that she going to have good amount coming from her pussy. As got near I went into a sexual fog licking and breathing her nectar OHooo goooood, it an amazing super drug for me my cock is that hard that hurts, I have slow down because I have shot a few loads while eating a woman lustrous cunt. Writing about has me hard and horny. Oh squirter, not a lot Ioved it she pulled me up and licking the juice from my face I worked my cock in wet pussy slowly she wasn't loose or not to tight I am a little thicker than average. I have enough self control I can go for over an hour edging her and myself. What nice is being in this sex fog it is blissful it is like doing a big hit on joint the sensations Ohooo!! And lose a sense of time. We kiss a lot then clinched me tight groaning in my neck, I started banging harder and I raise up so the head of my is rubbing her g spot I can tell she responding to after several minis, she has a hard hitting and intense one and squirting heavy amount. I can see that glazed look in her eyes. After few minutes she says it has been over a year since I had sex and years since I climaxed like that. I going to talk my sister, I thought that we would do this a time or two, do you think you would like to do this a couple of times a month maybe more that depends on her and of course you. What do you think? I am an addict and you have my fix.

Nicely written! I was hoping she would give him only last long slurp and suck to clean up any dribbles.

Good premise.

Too short.

Needed much more teasing him to get him hard when he couldn't.

Could have had discussion about whether he watched porn when masturbating. What kind? What kind/s of activities made him cum?

She could have offered to give him some incentive/s. Baring boobs? Baring ass? Baring pussy? Demonstrating how she played with her own pussy. Letting him smell her pussy, whether close, or from her wet fingers.

Four stars.

Too brief to have been worth the read.