All Comments on ''Cum' Uppence'

Very well written story.

Liked the stream of thoughts you implied.

You could have made the next morning into another chapter.

that you don't think this is a "good' situation...coming from someone that is envied by others I wouldn't wish this on others...sorry I am cute!!!! You fat old bitches need to find someone else to outlet on!!!! If you did that do me you would be hunted down and severely fucked up yourselves!Lets say you wouldn't be seen again...

Great story, loved the older uglier dominating the younger girl!

Nice twist having the women direct Lisa's humiliation at the hands of all the men in the bar. Loved the ending where the following morning a tramp is all set to pick up where the others left off.

Little Miss Priss in New Zealand obviously doesn't get the fact that if you act like a jerk to people you think are 'beneath' you because they're not your definition of cute, then you deserve to receive your come uppance, as in this story. I wouldn't wish the situation on anyone either, but no one should ever treat anyone as if they are beneath them. Well done. Also, at least I have the guts to put a name on my comment.

Retribution - Linda got home to her friends. Next big night Escape doors were blocked. Petrol cans sailed down the stairs into the club. Linda laughed as she tossed a light into the stariwell..

you are very talented keep them coming

Even though I'm a fan of humiliation stories, this was not my idea of erotic. Too much time was spent on the bathroom floor. It was well written, and I'm sure someone was turned on by the story; That someone just isn't me. I think it's a waste of subject matter, and had the potential to be a really hot story. Oh well... Different strokes for different folks.