by rockandroller
A wonderful story of an actual loving wife and husband, loving and lusting for each other. The erotic scenes were well-written. It was like we were there with them.
Excellent story and fine writing. Your detail made the story very real. Keep writing, great job.
I've read several of your other stories and enjoyed them very much. I must say that I probably enjoyed this one the most. Like your outher commentors I was struck by the love of two people that has grown deeper and deeper as the years roll on. Well done. Ronnie W.
You just keep rollin along! Hot, sexy tale. If ANY of it's true, man I envy you big time. PLEASE...give the lady my VERY best.
that was the best story iv ever read, i couldnt picture a scenario more real than that, absolutely gorgeous, the details were enough but not to much that u lost interest, and the lust and love of the wife, wow so real. keep writing ur amazing, iv never had an orgasm like that reading a story and coming from a female thats saying alot ;-), i dont have a literotica account but if u would like to reach me for thanks or anything email me at blakat45@hotmail.com
you voted it a "1" because the main characters were middle aged? Please, my pathetic friend, just go in the corner and shoot yourself, to spare the rest of us the burden of your existence. What a fucking ridiculous criterion to have.
Only true part was you going to Vegas.
You don't have a wife,so all the rest was just bullshit.