All Comments on 'Cumming of Age'

No story needs to be 12 pages long. Break it into chapters.

Very well written and wonderfully erotic. Loved the way the action escalated. I can't wait for the next chapter - and I hope it's 15 pages. :-)

I enjoyed this story and am surprised that no one else has taken to the time to comment here and urge you to continue writing. I don't neccessarily mean for you to write a sequel, although a second chapter would be worth reading, because this is a long story that has stopped at a good stand alone point. Any story would do if it is a well done as this one.

Another superb story. I couldn't stop reading, I was enthralled. I was somewhat surprised at my enthusiasm to keep going, keep reading. Great story, great writing, great characters. You didn't miss a beat.

OMG I loved this story!!