All Comments on 'Cummingtonite'

Well written, plausible, hot. Well done! More please?

There will be a chapter 2. This definitely shows promise.

Great work. The story builds nicely and really establishes the relationship and personalities before all the necessary coincidences begin to happen and the sex takes over the story. Unusually intelligent as well. I don't think a sequel is at all necessary but I look forward to future stories.

I hope you'll share more of your future experiences. This was VERY hot. Especially loved how you incorporated the couple in the adjoining room.

Why this story rates only a 4.82 is a great big mystery to me. It has everything: Realism, anatomical accuracy, erotic as hell, credibility and no arms race over dick lengths.

I’m hoping you’ll continue this story!

I had low expectations based on the title but it was very well told and very sexy. Thank you.

Nicely done and well paced and plotted from start to finish. The addition of the couple in the next room was unexpected and inspired storytelling, and you drew a nice balance between dialogue and description. Both characters were believable and people I'd enjoy knowing. Oh, and the sex was hot too. :)

Can't wait to read more of your work!

Your presentation of this story was excellent! Thanks!! Five Stars

A 5 star story all the way. I was incredibly frustrated thinking they weren’t ‘going to’ when they did. The perfect buildup. On to all of this writer’s stories!

More, please! Phil deserves someone better than Carolyn and we want to enjoy it with him. The Finnish part was sooo cool! Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Second time-knew I'd read it but couldn't remember ending.

EVERY bit as good, and hot, as 1st time-and I'd given it a 5 and fave/bookmark/follow author then-certainly deserved

LOVE body you gave her, very hot smart sexy dialogue...way lucky Phil meeting up with her again, and she's primed after 6 months and him a year 'sabbatical'...and loved the Finns, and her translating

"areolas the size of a loonie or so. " I love Canadians.

Nice. Sweet and gentle. A rarity in erotic writing.

Entertaining. Want more. Keep writing.

a rare find: ... a writer who knows how to write, and how to create "rock cock" sexuality.

... look forward to much more.

Tail_Gunner AKA Levi Coldwater