All Comments on 'Cupid's Elf'

Loved it !

Tess (uk)

Thanks, Tess! I just put a sequel to this in the Valentine’s contest: Cupid’s Elf. I like the combination of the two. I know a few people like them both.

Wait, wrong story! This is the sequel! Go read Elf on a Shelf in my stories, if you’d like more Zach and Honey!

Good story!

5

Thanks Boyd!

This story deserves a better rating than it has.

Maybe people just haven't read Elf on a Shelf before having read this one.

It's a cute lighthearted romp of a follow-up story and I for one think it's oodles of fun!

Tentacles: I kinda expect some hits on a story's rating when it's entered in a contest - people get wrapped up in the us-vs-them and then go through and try to support their favorites by knocking down the competition. Still - contest stories get 10X the amount of non-contest readers, so it's not the end of the world. I don't mind - I just like the chance to get my stuff to people who like it. Thanks for the compliment! I like rough edges of Zach and the innocence of Honey - makes for fun chemistry.

I LOVE how much personality and action you infuse into so few sentences! And humor! I'm wordy, I can't help it. I can only read and admire your style in utter awe!