All Comments on 'Cupid's Mess'

Thanks for writing such a great incest story centered around Valentine's Day.

Appreciated the extra trouble taken by the author to incorporate classical mythology, mischievousness, mischance with sudden heated mortal taboo lust.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

A very good story! Thank you!

Great story, Rarmons! Thank You!

When there is a pussy RIGHT T H E R E!!! shit another gay story. 1 star

I kinda hoped that the trickster would get what was coming, but maybe he did.

Fantastic idea, wonderfully executed.

Normally I'm not one who enjoys a story without a sense of seduction, but I really enjoyed this story. Adding in the part of Cirrus was a wonderful touch, even if it did end kind of suddenly.

Fantastic, and so, so imaginative! Thank you for that!

Understand why you persist as an “aanon”. Guess tapping that back door of a woman begging fir it is too homosexual right? My perception is you’re a wimp with a tiny dick and no chick will let you near them clothed much less nude. 5* on an excellent Valentines entry

This was such a hot story. The ending about Cirrus and Venus was just *chef's kiss*

Keep up the great work!

I have a very twisted sense of humor. this read to me sort of like the keystone cops with a comedy of errors. by the end of the first page I was holding my sides tears running down my cheeks, I have a very sore tummy from laughing so hard. I wish more people would write like this (r rated comedy)

stayed and am more interested in the life of the cupids than anything else. you are excellent at writing dialogue

One thing I have to give you credit for is, you matched mythologies correctly. A lot of authors will get lazy and write cupid and then put their superior as Aphrodite who is Greek and not Roman or vice versa. Then you got Orcus right on top of that bonus points. You deserve at least a 3-4 based on that alone

Loved the story, would love to read about next years contest.

*Olympus 🙄

I hope Gabe breeds his mom and she has his kid

i liked the way you choose to go best part was them bumping around in the dark.

What he did to Kayla got a 1 star dump. The author could have handeled this much better. WOW what an ASSHOLE!

If you were a striker in a football match you would have scored a hat-trick; incest, hairy pussy and anal. You earned the 5 stars I gave you. I just discovered your stories and they are very hot; grettings from México

Wow! This was an amzing tale. It's one of the veru few, including my many favorites, to give me an erection while resding it. Thank you, thank you!

tI gave it a 3.

But I would like to address the issue with some about ass fucking. You aren't gay if you slide your cock in a tight warm asshole. I love fucking a hot, wet pussy. I noticed that when I'm fucking a lover's tight asshole, I have more control. I can hit that ass without being too concern about cumming prematurely. It comes down to when you in some hot wet pussy sliding in and out there seems to be a lot of feeling happening. She is super wet. Her pussy seems to swallow your cock begging you to cum in her. A lot of the time you can't control yourself and you simply cum in her. When you are sliding in and out of her tight butt hole there isn't all that wetness outside of the lube you apply to your cock and her butt hole. You seem to have better control. You can go on sliding in and out of her tight asshole without being too concern about cumming in her.

Is it gay to 69 your lover? Keep in mind that as you are licking on her sopping wet pussy her butthole is just inches away. Does that make you gay?