All Comments on 'Cure For Business Trip Boredom'

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SuthrnlvrSuthrnlvralmost 3 years ago
Awesome

Great read please continue with possibly a series. It is way to soon to let these lovers part!

0ldGriz0ldGrizalmost 3 years ago

Great story. There is more than an hour left. I hope she decides to revitalize him. There’s a lot more that could happen.

Please write a part 2

bhojobhojoalmost 2 years ago

Hi the story was nice though it was a slow burn till the actual date night but it would have been better for an editor. If you can make some changes to fix a few errors .. ecstasy instead of extacy , platonic instead of plutonic for example.

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Although I’m no stranger to writing, I’ve never had the courage to share. When I came across this website, I found myself inspired to journal some of my own experiences and fantasies. As a visitor, I’ve enjoyed reading all the contributors’ stories and look forward to getting ...