by saddletramp1956
Yet again we needed a hero and he came to our aid so thank you. The reason I am saying this is if you have seen the utter garbage some writers have put in the loving wife category you would probably be ashamed. Don’t get me wrong there has been a few other heroes but try as they might the garbage was to much. And don’t get me wrong they tried hard to make the loving wife category proud. But the garbage coming in was enough to make anyone feel suicidal . It was just so poor and nearly 90% of there stories were in the wrong category. So thank you for your stories and even this one was fantastic read so keep up the great stories and don’t slow down at writing them please
Meant to give you 5 stars but hit 1 star accidentally. These Ron & Amy stories should go in the humour classification, always makes me chuckle. Thank you
Great fun. I would say implausible but I believe I once worked for the guy you based Jake on. Not that anyone ever put him on such a wheel, but he lost his job over such behavior.
This is a story very direct and to the point, as the plot does not need to meander to get to the point while making it very plausible.
5 stars.
Wasn’t a great story but different for a change. I give you a what i think you deserve... *****
This could be an article submitted in the Humor in Uniform section as an old war story.
I would have liked Amy give Ron permission to give Clarissa a proper fucking, she certainly hasn't gotten one from Jake in years!
This one was weak -- Amy was a different character, like she didn't know what was going on. No sense of fun like the other 2 -- time to end this series I think it's seems to have run it's course.
I was hoping they'd make Jake replace the bottle of Scotch he'd had a drink from.
This is a fun series, though it is probably going to be hard to come with enough original variations on the theme to keep it interesting for long. It's already seeming repetitive.
the boss fucks her..........what a concept!
How much of this was copy and paste from the last one in this series? Why did you feel the need to write almost the exact same story?
I'm thinking you need to get help, your stories are going downhill real quick! Same wife, 3 different bosses and she she acts like she had no idea this one for the third time wants to do what the previous ones did? And the 'eyes grew wide' is getting old, no other possible description? 1*
But I enjoyed reading about the arsehole coming unstuck big time.
The other story didn't have the arseholes wife present which was a new twist.
I would like to know how the 2 wives knew each other though. I would like to think they were in the same sorority and became friends though a few years different.
ST1956's world is an interesting place to visit, and I certainly enjoy your stories. Ron should have shot then bastard as soon as he came through the door unannounced. I think Amy should just leave this particular company,but that would cut off these good stories.
too much like the others and why is she still at that company and why did she not figure out he was the third to try the same thing?
Ron said a company rots from the head down. Amy has made the company a much better place to work. No where else to go unless there is a bad chairman of the board. I have enjoyed the series.
It was just wholesome, you know?
I'm all for Jake getting his ass beat, or emotionally broken.
But it IS nice, once in a blue moon, fix a scum-bag like Jake with just a tiny bit
of humiliation, and a bit of a scare.
I'm all for people getting one last chance, especially if they didn't ruin anybody. We understand he's a bit of a bully and cheater, but we don't actually know if he's actually cucked people. If he hasn't done something that degenerate, then I don't think a second and last chance is a stretch.
I read the story through without even coming close to laughing.
I expect pretty much anything from a Saddletramp1956 story, up to and including complete disassociation from reality, but I have to say that I didn't expect to see a completely paint-by-numbers one coming.
Even Jake's wife Clarissa enjoyed it. Always love it when a bully is exposed for the little prick he is! Thanks saddletramp!
If this was meant as biting satire, it failed miserably. It was basically a copy-and-paste job.
For me, the story was spoiled by inserting a cardboard cutout in place of the boss' character. He had all the copy/paste cliches, a boilerplate personality and no real dialogue. He could have been replaced by a Furby with no effect. Shame, really. It could have been good.
You created a character I honestly wanted to watch die a suffering death and a wife that I would marry in a heartbeat!
This author's writing and subject matter is rapidly going downhill. It's a shame.
ron and amy teaching the boss man a lesson again keep this series going please
It gets boring with the same caracters.
Create a new couple or a new firm or maybe let a wife deal with a female boss, but try something other.
For your stile and words 3*
We've now had three pretty much identical stories" Egotistical boss decides he's going to fuck married employee, announces it to hubby. Wife pretends to go along while telling hubby. Killing machine hubby and wife torment boss.
Minor detail differences, but essentially the same story.
Each story is more ludicrous than the previous one. I can't wait for the next one.
I had a good laugh, thanks.
I give you 5 stars for your spelling and zero stars for the story itself. Please stop writing this series.
Read all three stories and had fun with them. Nothing realistic about them, but if I want realistic, I'll sit on the porch and watch traffic. Short and enjoyable. Just the way I like it
ST, you are a very sick (in a very hilarious way) :>)) writer sometimes. Please don't change, these three stories hit my funny bone just right.
What's the opposite of 3 strikes
3 home runs?
Whatever great story enjoyed and will continue reading
Some second reading
This story was so damn good. Well written and so funny. Please keep up the good work.
Amy and Ron are the epitome of loving spouses. Tis a bit needing of suspension of disbelief, but that's ok. I really liked all three of the "Cure" stories. Amy is the loving wife in the strictest sense of "loving wife". Refreshing to say the least.
Likely? Nah
Possible? Yes
Probable? Less so, but still there.
Real life has more things that happen in fact than some of the most out there stories on here. The old saw does apply to any story site. "There are more things in heaven and earth..."
Excellent! The blood residue on the knife is perfect. The Wiseman’s had 3 opportunities to go public and completely destroy her bosses, but haven’t. It’d be worth at least a nice raise and healthy bonus each time. Too bad they didn’t take photos for the office,showing Jake’s girdle and missing dick. A shot of Amy using a magnifying glass would be hilarious on his office door.
but its there brains and minds that need the adjusting. TK U MLJ LV NV
Whose blood is on the knife since Ron cleaned the knife off with hydrogen peroxide.
In the 21st century by Saddletramp in living black and white just like the original movies. Signed: BTW
"The family that throws knives at fat, disgusting, assholes together, stays together!"
The first page of the story was kind of interesting. The second page, to me, was just silly. Still though, not a bad story.
your universe is always very interesting and surprising. Hope to see more of the action in it. I have enjoyed all of your stories and hope to see many more.
"Wheel of Death...!!!" Simply doesn't get better than this, Love your type of BTB stories which are written with your tongue firmly pressing inside your cheek...LMOL This one reminds me of Shakespeare's Fallstaff fool character.. Drunkenly dancing spilling ale everywhere while he screws anything including knotholes... Great comedy never takes itself seriously....and this is great tongue in cheek comedy!
5 stars there sport!!
Maybe the company can be taken over , That way their will be more Bosses for the wheel of Death . I Like the Series
Just loved it, Jake picked the wife to try and seduce and wrong husband and wife to try and bully. He is lucky that he was able to walk away in one piece. Well done. 5/5
Nice!
Sequal?
Perhaps the first one in which they have to bring a person back in (jake), and this time have to remove his balls. By shooting them untill its a mush that falls off. If they can find it (:
this tale is exactly the same as the previous two, only 'the names are changed to protect the innocent' lol
5 Stars on this one. My Ex had a Boss who did not know of My being a Marine. He was 3 inches taller and 40 pounds heavier than Me. He messed up and grabbed my Ex's ass and then Smirked at Me. I did what any of my fellow Marines would have done and broke 1 arm and messed up his knee. After that he treated My Ex and the other Ladies in the office with a lot of respect .
Wow. Amy has certainly dropped in IQ since the first chapter "Ounce of Prevention". In that chapter, she knew right away what was going on and helped put a stop to it with authority. By the second chapter, she was bring hit on for months, refused to tell her husband, was being extorted, worried about her job, and was crying on a couch with kess than 2 days til deadline for decision, and only then talked to her husband, with a whole "woe is me" tale. But then in this chapter she has no idea what is going or what the CEO would require. She puts on thr black dress suggested by her soon-to-be boss and cooks dinner for the three of them when he forcibly invites himself to their house? She has also worked there for years and has had this already happen twice and has no clue of the CEO's intentions or reputation? So she went from being amazing in chapter 1, to weak and conflicted in chapter 2, and now onto unbelievably naive and dumb?
Amy's IQ is still right up there.
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The dinner was a setup. Ron prepared his weapon before Jake arrived. Clarissa was primed to come to the basement play party.
Un peu lassant et répétitif l'histoire de la cave et la roue de la mort. Dommage.
Really liked this one and the others related to it. At last a proper loving wife.
The worst of the three, but entertain ing, a typical story but this author.
I am a little shocked to actually read a story about a loving wife not some cheating skank who says she's a loving wife like most stories in this category I will read more in this category if more writers who post in it was to actually write a story about a loving wife and not some cheating slut but I'm aware that those stories are fantasy of the writer and that they honestly believe that is a loving wife besides the few that the husband kicks the bitch to the curb and those are far and few between
Good story, but one of the commentators has a point about Amy's IQ seeming to wane.
Her prospective boss gives her a dress that is revealing enough that she can't wear a bra under it and suddenly invites himself to tea.
I would have expected Amy to say to Ron when he got home "Honey, I think we might have a problem and need your knives again, my boss has invited himself to tea and look at the dress he ordered me to wear"
From there the story went as fits the other two
I just think making Amy seem clueless to what Jake was up to was a mistake and didn't fit
A loving wife story about a loving wife im little surprised about it to be honest for it seems that most think a loving wife is about a cheating slut
This was a kind of silly story and I did not like it at all. I give the story only 2 stars. Just not my cup of tea.
Not the usual flavour of LW story. I loved this more than most. Wouldn't mind this being a series where arrogant twats get punished for abuse of their power and trying to seduce vulnerable young wives.