by Chimera44
More please. For whom are the whips and canes intended? Her or him? Five stars!
Loving the way you are developing the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
seriously I don't think you can write a bad story.. please keep going .. lol .. i'm hooked on three different story lines of yours now.. and I can't say which I like more ...
I just now found this second story, and love it as much as your other. Anxoiusly awaiting the next chapter, I have found a new author to follow!
Captivating plot, and it's really great to see the softer side of sensation play. Well done, sir!
I didn't finish because Eric is so annoyingly persistent. He smothers.
I'll have to come back to try and finish
I have completed the first two chapters and this is definitely one of my favorite multi chapter selections on Literotica. Can't wait to read the rest. Thank you.