by ImprobableReality
Extremely well written. The prose flows well and the smut is super-hot. While I think the story stands perfectly well on its own, part of me wishes for a sequel. Perhaps a surprise (or not so surprising) pregnancy?
Either way, you've earned a follower.
Beautifully written and very hot! Loved the pacing! At least she knows she doesn't love her fiance!
Forget the plan B. She'll look great with the baby bump her black lover gave her.
I found this story to be very hot and close to home. I had two fuck-athons with a big cocked stud, one month before my wedding, while he wasn't black, some things you never forget or regret :)
Thanks for the nice comments on my first publication! :)
For now this story will stand on it's own, since I first want to explore a few other ideas bouncing around in my head. I have given a continuation some though, but no promsises it'll ever actually get written out. :)
What a wonderful story! And so well written. Its a good job I was sitting on a leather chair.... Amy
Hot read! But at some point.. Shit’s gonna hit the fan. Baby or no baby, someone who was there will talk. They always do, Weeks, months, years… Hopefully sooner than later. Then it all blows up.
The mixture of uncertainty and undeniable curiosity turned lust, turned need, was amazingly done. One of the most well written stories I've read in here. I sincerely hope you don't stop as I'd LOVE to know what other thoughts are dancing around in that head of yours!!
Well, if I know right, even plan B wouldn't work for her if she's ovulating or this thing happens a day or 2 after ovulation.
Someone corrects me if I am wrong, please.
In case she escape pregnancy, hopefully you would make part 2/3 Where after a few months of wedding she gets into an affair with this guy or another black guy (her black cock conversation has already happen).
But please don't make the husband a cuck please, too many cuckhubby story, it's better if he kick out his cheating wife as it's solidify the notion of "consequences of action" .
The writer has exceptional literary skills. For those choosing to add negative comments please find another site as this space is really for entertainment not moral posturing.
Interesting story. Emily's not married yet, so she isn't committing adultery per say. Hopefully we'll find out in a future chapter if she decides to carry her black baby and get married anyway. Maybe she can find time to fuck her black boyfriend throughout most of her pregnancy leading up to her poor unsuspecting husband getting the surprise of a lifetime in the delivery room.
Really well written. The leadup and and anticipation is some of the best writing on this site. Also please ignore the weirdo commenters. There's a lot of "anonymous" commenters these days that feel free to be racist while they hide behind their keyboards. They're not worth even acknowledging.
These whores are not mentors nor even good people, they are however part of an ever growing number of women who willingly lie, cheat and deceive, with absolutely no remorse. They are evil self-entitled narcissists and need to be made to face extreme consequences for their actions otherwise their disgusting debauchery will be the final decent into a literal h3ll on earth.
This was fantastic, well written and the build up was great. Hope there is more and glad you added the pregnancy risk to it. Keep up the good work.
Great work! Please keep working on stories...I can think of some more ideas anytime you'd enjoy discussing.
Really enjoyed the story and it's build up to the climax. And the ending could go either way. Good work.
How is that believable? She’s got the man of her dreams who wants to marry her and with who she’s already decided to have a family with, and she’ll throw that all away for a douchbag she's met for ten minutes, a douchbag she knows nothing about and who spends his nights snagging soon to be married women. Sounds like a sensible option!