by precipiceofoblivion
Always nice to see a new chapter of my favorite running story.
Can't wait to read it, I've loved it all up until now!
Can't wait for Tamara to get introuble and I like the idea of krista and sara
you really have a good story going here, but you need to drop all the dribble dialogue and stop with all the sound effects, like the "Mmmmmmmm" that kind of stuff is childish and doesn't belong in a story like yours.
Anonymous #3,
Thank you for your feedback and the high praise! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'd love to discuss in greater detail the aspects of my story which aren't working for you. In particular, I am unclear on what you are describing as "dribble dialog." Are you referring to all dialog or only certain types of dialog?
Please feel free to e-mail me directly: precipiceofoblivion@gmail.com.
I just wanted to say I love this series it is amazing! I especially love the giantess and face farting content! A little back story on me is that I was surfing the net looking for a facesitting series that fit my interests and I found this one the title to me was misleading but I tried it anyway and after the first 5 chapters I was hooked. You've done an amazing job doing this series and each chapter you add surpasses the last. I'm a huge fan of this series and I'm in love with what this series presents and how much it can accomplish! Keep up the magnificent work and I am looking forward to your new chapter in the series! 😍😍😍😀
I really like the random feet, shrink, vore and spit fetishes throught the story.This way it is much more than good old femdom facesitting.Something like a forceful kiss where Tamara pushes her saliva down on Sara's throat could be really nice too, as Krista said: get creative!
Been following this series since chapter 1, i gotta say this is best story i found on this site so far, i only wish you could spend more time on it because 1 chapter a month is not enough!
Keep up the great work man
I love the story. I'd really like to see more of the threats of using Saras mouth when she needs to go to the bathroom. It'd be really awesome if she accidently pees on Saras face - maybe after she'd finished climaxing on her face she gets so comfortable and laughs so hard she just lets a bit out before she realises what's happening. Then she realises how disgusted Sara is at getting pee'd on by her struggles underneath her that she finishes what she started and pees all over her face. Whatever happens I'm looking forward to the next chapter