by QSQuinn
I was a little skeptical at first when I saw the low initial score, but I am a fantasy fan, and I love incest stories. QSQuinn you might have been a victim of the terrible 1s. Anonymous readers who don't have the guts to login, who score stories a 1 simply to be mean.
I, on the other hand, found myself completely taken by the story. Although the descriptions of the area were vague, the emotions presented by the characters were very good. It was not perfect, and I felt there were sections that could have been worked a little better, but overall...great job. Looking forward to part 2. Oh! and I tried to counteract my suspicions of the 1s culprits by giving you a 5* rating...I wish I could have given you more. Good Luck in the future.
And if your gods do not countenance your love, then scribe your love in blood and stone. The old gods shall always heed the call of blood. For good or for ill, they shall always heed the blood.
Excellently written.
A very well-written story. Believable characters and a good story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Amazing. Thank you. I’m not sharp enough to understand the epilogue but the story is brilliantly written.
The whole thing started talking about and describing the blood mage. The epilogue shows the boy that the brother and sister had was a blood mage hence curse of the blood mage since the brother survived being attacked by a blood mage