All Comments on 'Cursed Gift Ch. 02'

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Emerald_DragonEmerald_Dragonabout 16 years ago
You are so becoming one of my favorite authors!!!

Awesome! I hope that you have more planned for them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it!!!

I have found few authors on this site that can rival your writing style- I hope that more Alex and Wade stories are coming in the future and I can't wait to read any other new stories that you come out with.

20collegegrl20collegegrlabout 16 years ago
Truly Wonderful

Normally I'm not into gay stories, but yours are truly stunning please keep writing!

GlosUKGlosUKabout 16 years ago
Awesome

Your a superb writer and i eagerly look forward to more stories about Alex, Wade and their friends & family.

PJxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great, great conclusion, great story

This is a really great story, the writing is beautiful and the story-line was intriguing. Please keep writing more stories, I've read all of them so far and they are wonderful, keep them coming!

BelleHoneyBelleHoneyabout 16 years ago
Brilliant

Once again you reduced me to tears. You have a rare talent. Keep writing and I promise to keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
beautiful

i love your stories so much i'd love see more of wade and alex.god that was a really hottt story

lillibetlillibetabout 16 years ago
V enjoyable but better if longer

I thoroughly enjoy your stories: I think they're very well written, hot and very readable. However, I think they suffer from the problem of all short(ish) stories in that the story doesn't have quite long enough to develop. If this were extended out into a much longer story it would have real potential to be absolutely brilliant - you've definitely got the talent.

alecspetalecspetalmost 16 years ago
Again!

Another fantastic story! The love between Alex and Wade is something that seems to be missing in a lot of m/m stories and I love that they express that and don't get caught up in the whole macho/men don't talk about their feelings crap. Call me a sap, but I enjoy romantica, the blend of romance and erotica, and you really have a knack for that kind of writing. Add the suspense, and it's damn near perfect! Thanks again for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Sequel !!!!

Hey your story's are great, I keep reading them over and over and over again..Don't know how u do it, but please dont stop now...I wanna know more about Wade and Alex...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
OMG

OMG!

So sexy, I loved it. Tell me theres a part three to it?

PetsAngelsPetsAngelsalmost 16 years ago
More, please?

Okay. I read this and "All That I Am" at least once a week. Please tell me you have some more coming? Pweeze?!? <bottom lip trembles> Purdy pweeze?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good.....

I loved it , but I found it too short like the first chapter... I think if you had convined the antagonists or at leasted paired then together both it would have made a good dramatic story, but you created to plots scenes in one story, might I add too quickly... iloved youe concept, but it stringly lacked in many aspects...this is my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great!

this was the best i hope you have more stories coming, you're one of the best authors i've read in a long while thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OMG! More please!

You are a seriously talented writer. It's a wonder my monitor didn't spontaneously combust from the night club scene alone! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

BabyVampyBabyVampyover 15 years ago
Go 'head now!

This was a fantastic chapter. Absolutely great! Thanks so much for writing it! It was greatly enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Beautiful, Powerful, Unearthly

I can't say how much I loved both Alex and Wade stories. I actually went to a free music website and listened to "I'm Your Man" while I read the story. I think the music made it that much more poignant.

iguanacoosbayiguanacoosbayover 14 years ago
Brilliant!!

You are so totally AWESOME!! Your talent is evident in every story of yours I've read.

Is there any chance of a chapter 3, 4, 5, 6, or so??Keep up the fantastic work, as you are truly blessed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Perfect!

that was a perfect story and i loved it. Please please write more about them and their life together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
A lovely couple.

Just grand work and a great happy ending for the duo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Truly wonderful!

SweetNess444SweetNess444over 13 years ago
Can I Just Say...

Awesome! I read it twice. Loved it from start to fin. Great job.

wingedchaoswingedchaosover 12 years ago
Wow!

Read the chapter and just HAD to read the second! Hot! SEXY! and psychically romantic! WOW~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Talented and witty

This story was as near to perfect as you can get.

TimothyMTimothyMalmost 12 years ago

I liked both chapters, but the repeat of the sexual threat to Alex was a bit annoying. On the other hand, closure about the Jesse problem was a good idea. Anyway, it will be interesting to see if you can do something with the couple within a more or less normal life. The sex scenes are totally hot, by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I've read this story so many times and I love it every single time. You've got to write a third chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow

Very erotic.wish lovers could read their minds.Alex and Wade are freaking hot.how they made luv without verbal words.what abt a next chapter where one of the boys just cheat a little bit.cozing an argument bt they will end up in each others arms.of coz wade will be the cheater coz he will be so lonely and damn horny that he cant help himself.he just end up realising it was a mistake.he be away to a certain trip

TiyeTiyeabout 11 years ago
More

You really must write more Alex & Wade stories. I can't get enough of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

WOW!

canndcanndabout 9 years ago

I'm glad I caught this story, despite the rough content. These two characters are really interesting. the way you made 'their' gift work was really interesting. They are a sweet/hot couple. I'd only have liked to see you develop a bit more of the intimacy in terms of what they learned about each other. Sadly, he knew more about Alex from his sister than from him, it seemed. But that is a small complaint. Overall, a great story and the parts that you wrote for the songs were amazing. You have a talent :)

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 7 years ago
Why

Didn't you write more of these people?

microkrittermicrokritterabout 1 year ago

LOVED IT! Please write more.

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