All Comments on 'Cut & Dried'

that was hot i would like to read on...

Slow teasing arousal building to wonderful love making, just the way I like it. Mat, you and EK have done a wonderful job together. Love, Patti.

Great pacing and dialogue...the buildup was fantastic--fun and oh so orgamsic. Thanks for posting it!

that was a very exciting story.

I usually don't get hard reading many of the stories but I found myself stroking myself as I was reading yours.Hopefully you will have a part 2.

Remind me to book my next toy party through this consultant and my next haircut through this stylist. Excellent work, you two! ~Imp

Very beatifully written and well paced. Just enough build up to the very satisfying action! Bravo! *golf clap*

What a great collaboration you two make.. wonderful story xxx

Fantastic job you guys!! I loved the story

~Honey

Just a great story. Now what about a real haircut...

Can't wait.....

Thanks

That was very, very hot.

Good build up, fine characters and really hot sex.

Would love to hear about the rest of the party.

Well done.

First: you two need to write more together.

Second: Love the buildup and of course the sex.

Third: We need a part II, I wanna see them play in the closet!!!

Excellent colaboration gals!

Haven't tried the lesbian section before. Obviously I've been missing something. Beautiful build up of sexual tension , great erotic description of the sexual encounter.All in all a great story--- no thugs, no wimps, no pimping husbands and slutty wives. very refreshing. Thanks for the story. the Ct. Yankee

""Fuck......me......I want you......to fuck me. Please." I pleaded."

By this stage, I was screaming, "I wanna be Rebecca,I wanna be Rebecca" lol

Wow. Don't you two dare stop writing together.

Awesome job you two and now da mouse needs a cold shower ;-)

Flickering glances, surging hips and whatever are just a few of the weird expressions in this BORING story. For some reason gays always have hot ratings on their stories and they are just untalented writing followed up by gushing biased reviews. The writing is detached and lacking expression. Both of you need an honest editor to educate you on trying to pull at least something of literature out of you.

Flickering spite, surging ignorance and whatever are just a few of the weird motives that drive you, Anonymous in USA. I’m afraid now it’s time to put cowardly little trolls like you in your place. I expect that when you read this, you’ll probably go straight to my stories and start trolling them. Go ahead. Make my day ;-) What you’re too stupid to realise is that comments such as yours are more a reflection of your own sad failings as a person than the story they’re attempting to critique – albeit in a clumsy, Neanderthal way. I think that these remarkable ladies need a publisher, rather than an editor, to help them share their creative talents with the wider world. With people who are able to appreciate the subtle expressions, the slow build-up of excitement that reaches one of the most beautiful climaxes I’ve ever read. Five out of five, girls. You’ve brought one hell of a lot of pleasure to me today. A truly wonderful story.

Wonderful story...now, how about the followup in which your two lusty heroines fuck each other senseless with a strapon (one missionary style; one doggystyle)?

If a story ever needed a sequel, this certainly does. I want to see just what's in that closet! Maybe a secret door to a 'playroom', perhaps? How about getting the maid involved?

The only complaint I have is that I don't remember reading a description of Danielle. Age, looks, nothing.

I presume we'll read more of the escapades that followed? I think that might be an excellent idea.

mismused

OMFG all I can say right now is thatyou two need to need to write a book together. Damn This is the first time I have ever voted or written a comment on a story and believe meyou two beautful people deserve a Pulitzer for that one

Keep writing

...I started reading one of Matriarch's stories expecting excellence. But what did I get? - Super-excellence! On your own, you are marvellous, but with this partner you are unbeatable, and I look forward to more collaboration between the two of you. The one bitter comment below simply exposes the ignorance [or self-hate] of the person who wrote it. What does s/he want, for Chrissakes? Perhaps a non-erotic erotic story! Poor sod. Meanwhile, I - and obviously many others - love you. Keep it up.[Actually,you have kept 'it' up for nearly an hour. Damn, where are the tissues?]

The entire story was fabulous, from the introduction of the characters to the build up of tension. I hope the two of you write more together. Emerald is one of my favorites and now I have to read every Matriach has written. Can't wait for more.. (goes off to do some heavy duty reading) Thanks for sharing.

A great ride. Thanks. The postscript delighted me almost as much as the story itself.

what a ride.. I would never have known this was co-written if you hadn't said so. I hope to read bunches more from the two of you. :)

fabulous, excellent writing I was engrossed right from the beginning.

i loved the story

very sexual

can t wait for the continuation

when I read the line, "'Oh God!' I thought to myself. 'She can't do that! There's no moaning!'" It reminded me of Tom Hanks complaining out loud, "There's no crying in baseball."

A wonderful story, lovingly told.

Thank you.

I also thought of that Tom Hanks lime, when she says "There's no moaning."

I've been having so many dreams lately of making love to a woman... and this story was perfect.

Thanks for a great read!

Wow! Great story :)

...guess I just never found the right hairdresser. Seriously, collaborations can either be very good or they can totally miss because the writers aren't on the same wavelength. In the case of 'Cut & Dried" it's worked out very well. Between you you have created an enjoyable story which works. A five-star effort.

it was beautifuly done it was hot n sexy. we need a fallow up for this story

Giggle ...... I hope her Manager conforms her "private appointment amd the additional private extended work" ..... So after dreaming the reality was more to her likings ...... Sweet innocent "manipulation "

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