All Comments on 'Cute Model'

Wonderful to read the "Loving/Kindnes" you used as a central thread of the story. Keep up the good works.

Best written story on the pages - Bravo - More, More and thank you.

Great story, very romantic, well written.

I loved it.

Please continue with new stories !!!

what a sweet and generous portrait. well done

You conveyed with words, feelings so subtle and fine that I produced emotions I've unfortunately not experienced in years. You allowed me to visit memories so vividly that it was as if they were created just yesterday. I had forgotten I was once in love, thank you for reminding me.

its the best story i readed on the website yet.

Being a photographer myself..i know how u could feel, it's like another world we see through the lens. i give u a 200 time Bravo!

Just one word for you: Amazing! Write more, maybe even a sequel

Hands down, One of the best stories I've ever read.

It was so hot, but also so sweet!! I loved how love was a theme, but it also was extremely erotic!

You have captured the tenderness and intimacy really beautifully. A real turn on to read this story.

This was an awesome story. You should write more! Just like real life!

you are skilled really skilled with words. loved it. a very beautiful and exciting creation. hope i experience something like that in my life.

Very cute and sweet story. Had a very nice innocence over it even though it still got as "sexy" as it needed to be. Very good balance that you have found.

We would love to read more from you.

I loved your story, nut why did you stop at this moment? I can see a lot of hot stories afterward.

nothing less than a master piece

Excellent red hot SEX with strong element of fond giving makes for a VERY fine story. But for Pete's sake edit your work! Seize is not the way to spell cease. And some sentences make no sense at all. Four stars I give you, but you can do better.

Wow, really good story, well written and exotic.

You have a great story . So well written that I felt as though I was caressing the girl my self. I am an older gentlmen who had an encounter such as yours. Your story brought back those fond memories. Thank you

Chet

This was simply fantastic.

That honestly was the best story I have read on Literotica ever.

Thankyou .

Emma.

Straighten out the pile of typos, and it will have earned the fifth star. Thank you for writing!

Great!!! that was just hot...

lovely work!! ^^., keep it up!

It reminds me of my fiance and how we are together. Thank you for bringing back the memories. Your story is wonderful and probably the best I have read in a very long time. (even with the typos) I gave it 5 stars.

Thank youfc

I've photographed many females, from older to younger and know this story well.

For your first story, it was very hot.

I just happened to stumble upon this story. It's so well-written - real, and yet tremendously erotic. Thank you so much for writing it in such a loving manner.

It needs DIALOGUE between the characters, not just descriptions. It could have been Sooooooo much better.

Story may have been written 15 years ago but still hot, relevant and sexy. I love the youthful innocence. I was imagining her being a high school girl around 15 or 16 years of age, shy but hot as hell and I would have loved to have been able to do that photo shoot of her or at least been on the set to observe. :-) Like someone else said, you should keep writing. I gave 5 stars.