by Tx Tall Tales
Congrats on wrapping up the overseas adventure. Maybe Chris could be a cameo in the house? Another woman could stir some things up
This is an incredible story. I love the characters and the adventures. Please keep this going, it is just too good to end.
Thank you for this story. The love the characters share is a joy to read, please continue to nurture the relationship between Debbie, Beth and Jack.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Man this is one of the best series of stories I have read and at 62, believe me I have read a few. Well done, please keep this series going, it has been a delight to read it all.
Best Regards
Popeye Oz
Love the series, am especially interested in the growing possessiveness between our gallant Hero and Debbie.. I think its time that Debbie got pregnant!! just my 2 cents, any suggestions from other readers???
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Gary Andrews (garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)
I've been enjoying this series for quite some time now, and when I looked it up out of nostalgia recently, finding out there were updates- and so MANY updates as well- was absolutely splendid! Each of them is well worth the reading, and I look forward to the next one in particular. (This character development for Jack is very interesting, I can hardly wait to see where you go with it.)
Thank you so much for writing these, and I hope you continue until you're satisfied with the story entire.
I noted one anomaly in you story. At one point you say Jack is fluent in Spanish because he lived in South America for 4 years and later you refer to his Spanish as being clumsy. Not a criticism, just letting you know your readers are paying attention to details.
Your writing style keeps the readers interest and you might even consider looking into having some of your work published.
I have lived where you live but have given up the rush, rush, traffic of the DFW area and moved back to OKC. Still busy as ever even at 74 but life moves somewhat slower here. cdn405@yahoo.com
Great story with and elegant twist at the end for a simple 2 years out of school engineer. Carry on and satisfy your loyal readers and fans. This is much more than a porn story, Well Done!!!
Started the read two days ago , loved the whole thing thoroughly, great job !!!
Just surprised that the kids are so "absent" from anyone's comments, affection etc...
Romantic with all the eroticism one could desire. Please continue the saga for a while. Thank you.
I just finished my third read of this series, and enjoyed it just as much as the first two. Is there an ETA for the next chapters?
Just finished reading the story and it was totally fantastic... hope there are at least 26 more chapters to this story... the girls going to spain would be great.
Best series of stories I've read on here and I've read a lot believe me !
Just started reading this and finished reading all chapters in a day. What happened in 2011. 2 postings in 2011 when you were so prolifc in the past. Please continue with this excelent story.
This series has been well written so far. Now you have so many loose ends hanging, you can't not write. I'll be interested to see how you resolve all of this. Keep writing, please.
This is like a horse race. Almost all horses are named Jack, Jack Off, Jack's Boner, etc. All jockys are naked females named Beth, Debbie, etc. So fat it's a 25 furlong race, but the end is not in sight. PLEASE GET US TO THE FINISH LINE !!
There are so many threads to be followed with this brilliant story. The Major visits America, Amie gets accepted as a full partner, Chris visits the house of lust, Debbie gets pregnant,...... Please continue.
She feels guilty about betraying her husband, not to mention her children and the next moment, she is screwing Jack. Has she absolutely no morals or what ?
of morals in this story is quite disgusting. No matter how well written I'm left with a sick feeling in my stomach to think that this could happen and probable has. If you play lose with another's heart it will end in tears, at least usually far worse. TK
The whole Spain section was fantastic, even better than the rest of this already excellent series.