All Comments on 'CWB 6 - Bachelorette Party'

Naw, tell em. And see if you cant have some fun together with the two couples.

The truth or dare question jar was a great idea and made for a nice wrap up to CWB. I am glad this chapter was finally beyond the cousins issue and just plain fun.

I enjoy your stories and hope COVID isn't an issue for your health or future stories.

Thank you

Loved the story, disagree with the other comment about having fun as two couples. I'm sure it BenLong would do a great job with it, but I don't feel like it's needed. I'd even rather it be Josette since she was feeling left out.

You're a pretty good storyteller, but this one has lots of flaws.

I think in the past, you've had a good editor, but you apparently don't have one now. At least not a good one.

Maybe I missed an explanation, but it seemed odd that we had been reading Rick's point of view, then suddenly we were hearing from Stacy's pov.

Is Ellen's husband Dave, or Tom? Then later, the Uber driver is Tom.

Is her high school friend's name Josette, or Rosette?

Slow down, get your characters correct in your own mind.

Thanks anon for some good comments. Yes, you are correct, there was a typo in Josette’s name; there were also some other mistakes that have already been corrected and resubmitted, and of course the correction for her name showed up before I could even respond here. I did not see and no one else commented on Dave versus Tom, but you were correct, there definitely was a mistake there also and I've correct. It happens occasionally when you are writing, you have a tendency to see what you want to see, not what you actually wrote.

WOW just wow I want a party like that please that is going in my favorite list

Thank you honey LOVED it

I sure hope she tells him, she really shouldn't start being dishonest with Ricky. Hot lesbian action but I am looking forward to more between the two of them. At least his sister is looking out for him :3

Boring!

Well, Gee anonymous, glad you read to the end of this BORING story. Although, from the e-mail feedback I've got from female readers, this apparently struck a chord with many of them and they don't seem to agree.

Different anonymous, because if you respond that strongly to a one-word comment, even an unquestionably boorish and unhelpful one, I don't need you knowing my pseudonym. Life's too short to deal with angry people unnecessarily.

Anyway, my question: you're saying you've gotten emails from female readers saying that a story about infidelity at a bachelorette party (and no, the dick doesn't have to enter the vagina for it to be cheating. Hell, a dick doesn't have to be involved) "struck a chord" with them? Damn. That's a lesson and illustration of the importance of being incredibly careful when selecting the woman you'd like to marry, if ever there was one!

But then, some men enjoy being cuckolded before they're even married, I suppose, and some men just trust too much. Sucks for them, right? /S

I get that swapping and cuckoldry is one of your kinks, based on your other work, but it's not one of mine, and while this may have been mild by your standards, it left me cold.

While I dislike the scenario, at least she didn't blow the stripper... cheating with a woman is an exception in her mind, I guess. I didn't really hate it though, so I can't give it one star, but I also can't give it more than three.

Thanks for the comment anon, although apparently you've missed my multiple disclaimers in my stories.

Although I have now written several "cuckold" stories, it is not one of my kinks. As for emails and comments, just look at the very first in this comment chain "WOW just wow. I want a party like that please." That I can write about something, say "murder," doesn't mean that I have to understand, want, desire, lust for, or any other adjective that says I desire to murder someone. I'm a male, so can I write from a female perspective? Yes - but that doesn't mean I want to be a cross dresser, transvestite, or in any way want to be a woman. Do women like to do or desire the same things that men do? Yes, absolutely. Do they have naughty/sexy bachelorette parties? Yes. The location that I described, or another one similar, advertised the location on-line as "the ultimate bachelorette party location" or something similar, which is where the idea of the location came from. This is erotic literature. It's fantasy. Different strokes for different folks, and for the previous anon poster - you're correct the comment was unquestionably boorish and unhelpful. If he/she didn't like the story, all he had to do was click away. I don't normally delete comments, good or bad, but sometimes I really should do just that. Unfortunately I'm more of a man of a few thousand words. LOL

I've got no problem with you not liking the story, to each their own and thanks again for reading, and I hope that at least some of my stories you'll enjoy.

After reading the first chapter I went to check the ratings of all the parts, the moment I saw the low ratings(compared to other parts) and the word bachelorette I knew that this was going to be bad, I am not going to bitch about it as much as I didn't waste my time reading the all the chapters before this and then get disappointed later on, I guess this just wasn't for me, would have loved reading it but this chapter just ruined it for me