All Comments on 'Cycling Can Be Fun'

You not only make your stories believable but your sex scenes read as actual happenings between your characters. We need a lot more like you and far fewer authors who simply describe sexual events. They are so fake they are boring.

Keep writing ---we need a lot of your work to make up for the others I just described.

very good style, loved how it was a story about a trip more than a story of just random meaningless sex. good shit :)

A dream story.

Wish it had been me and I love Cycling and the German frauleins.

Janamarie,

I just loved your story. I happen to be an American living here in Germany (Nuernberg just South of Erlangen). Your complete story including the German phases is wonderful. Please keep up the good writing

Great Story. Very well told, with very well developed characters. Nice Work! Even the spelling and punctuation were good.I like your style!

The only thing that would make me happier than reading your stories would be for you to tell them to me in person. I am reading them all. one by one. You're the greatest.

Truly one of the best article I have read. The story was setup well and the characters very real and believeable. Some punctuations can be improved but well-written generally. Keep it up!

You are an excellent writer maybe you could include bestiality and semen eating with food in your other works

I am sitting here reading every one of your stories... One right after another... You are such a great writer, I just cannot believe what I am seeing... Loved the little phrases in german on this one... Please don't ever quite writing them... Auf Viedersein Meine Freundin...

I am reading through your work and this has to be the best ever. Just loved the story and the way it built up - fantastic.

you have a gift for telling a story that has sex in it unlike many others which are just sex, sex, sex with a bit of a story. Your work is just amazing and so enjoyable to read. Well done.

I have now read most of your stories and loved this one. If you're not a professional author you are missing your calling and should give serious thought as to getting into that line of work. You are cerainly the equal of many of the professional authors I have read.

Thanks for the entertainment.

Loved this story, loved the happy ending with the mother, instead of the same thing you read all the time with the couple going their own way after the bike trip.

One thing though, how the hell does a amateur pilot like Marie's husband fly a experimental airplane. I would think only a professional pilot would fly a plane like that. Other than that i really like the story.

Ich liebe Ihren Schreibstil sehr.