All Comments on 'Cycling Weekends with Sis'

Just as good as I remembered it. Thanks for reposting this story.

Excellent, this was always one of my favorites!!! And it’s still just as awesome as I remember even after multiple read throughs.

I really liked your story...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Loved it then and am so glad that you posted it to enjoy it again, thank you!

What a marvelous and romantic story. Both siblings have both learnt from previous mistakes and a common goal has had a huge impact on the openness between then, both making each other better

Glad you are reposting your stories. Have always enjoyed your stuff.

Chapter two?

Just very nice, warm, and hot.

It was nice, but how could she had made fun of fat girls in high school when she was a fat girl herself?

As good an author as you are, I couldn't escape the sense that this one story depicted the world of cycling with far, greater enthusiasm, clarity, and realism than the relationship between the brother and sister. By the time of the second massage, I had searched for "lactate" to see whether it was different from lactic acid, appreciated the diminishing physical benefits of a ride longer than twenty miles and lost interest in the sterile relationship between the two main characters. Feel free to delete this comment as all your other works deserve better.

Well written, keep up the good work

A very good story. Please write more about them

I’ve always loved this story. Thank you for reposting it.

Thanks for all the comments! Just to clarify, I never delete comments*. No story is perfect, and there will always be readers for whom the story didn't work. I want everyone to share their opinion, positive or not, and to know I read it and think about it.

* I've deleted two comments in my years on Literotica. One because it seemed to be for a story other than mine. The other because it was attacking other commenters.

Anon, reread the story. She wasn't ft in high school. She was a cheerleader. She onlt got fat after she graduated. A wonderful story. 4*

please continue.

Thank you for reposting. I can't wait to have another go at some of your work. Please don't ever let the comments from a few idiots stop you from writing. There are lots of authors who have managed to write one decent stop and lots of very poor. Very few can write good every time and I do not expect that, but sometimes an author comes along that hits a five and sometimes a six. You are that author. Getting any comments takes some doing. Few people take the time to say Thank you. For what it's worth I will say Thank you very much. Please continue.

Very nice - 5 starts worth of nice - but one confusing paragraph where he is talking about their parents with his sister and calls them 'my' parents rather than 'our' parents.

Sweet story, easily worth five stars. I'll even overlook your reference to a crankshaft instead of a crankset.. ;}

Thanks. I am glad that you didn’t change the story

Thanks for writing ACBEAR

Yummy story. Seriously. Very tasty.

Good Job!!! Just need to know who moves into who's bedroom....LOL.. 5 Stars!!!! Now Add a chapter or two.

An excellent story from beginning to end!

Thank you so much for writing a story that beings satisfaction on this level. I really love reading an account of two characters where so much respect and love are encompassed within the plot development, especially one with a warm and happy ending!

It won't hurt my feelings whatsoever if you decide to compose a second chapter to this story, and will hope strongly that you do.

Thank you for writing stories that are meaningful!

Sincerely,

B4PW

This story was well done well worth the many accolades that have been accorded to it including mine. It should be a natural occurrence for a sister and brother to love one another since they are born from the same womb and the same semen and it it exceptional for a brother and sister to truly become lovers like this story portrays. Sure lots of brothers fuck their sisters but that is not love it is only lust to slip their dick in their sisters pussy. This story represents a brother and sister who have a sincere love for one another which wil ultimately result in something a lot greater. MM

I loved reading this story and would be very happy to read more of these two as they go through life as a couple. More please.

İts good to see you're back.

You had a great story about girl who catch her brother watching girls who is try out clothes then she become model.

Will you publish that story ?

Story was good but not great. A 5" dick, huh? How unusual. Thanks.

Thank you for posting this one again, it's better than I remembered it.

It's great to see you posting. I look forward to reading more from you new or reposted. You have a way with words that make them very plausible and comforting at the same time. There was only one mistake I caught that was apparent - "I was so stimulated from the massage that I knew that I would last long at all" and context around it should have been wouldn't or would not. However, keep writing you're one of the best authors on the site.

Good story, though a little more build up between them would have been nice. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Fantastic story. I love how smooth it was. Thank you

Average story, pretty predictable. Still, it held my interest. Did not care for the.”… flabby girls..” comment.

Really like your style, and the other stories written. Just felt this one not quite up to your standard.

Good story but predictable ending.

It felt like you put more effort into promoting cycling as a fitness sport than in telling about a bro & sis falling into a romantic love we could all see a mile away. This would be fine if you went on to delve more into their complicated sex lives as they share that future. As it stands, I gave it a very generous 4/5 despite having a few proofreading goofs.

Very well done

You should continue telling their story

Hardly any build up for the relationship. While they seemed close there was nothing that tied the two together. Also, the sister came across a little bit crazy to blame the guys for something that is not remotely their fault or business; her depression.

I understand all of the comments I see but some if them are so damn critical. I just enjoyed reading it.

We loved reading this sexy story ,

Another really, really great story.

good job

Excellent

Loved it