by CraCyn55
To be honest at least a 4.5, dont know how i missed the first chapters but have caught up now and can't wait for the next episode, please dont keep us waiting too long.
Great premise. I have now caught up on all the chapters and look forward to more. I would love for you to expand on the past experiences with Eddy as well as delve deeper into your feelings as they use you in the van.
Great stuff.
The scene in the car was amazing. I was a little disappointed how hastily it (and this whole chapter) ended, tho.
ok so far i love the story but im going to have to say what got me to read it was the first chapter.her in the car pool and them undressing her and dressing her the way they want her to look. and i hope you you tell alot more on what else happens in the car and at work to her.i truley hope you finish this story.
You get you rocks of subjugating females in your story, grow up and know women are the greatest gift on earth
It rivals the best of Literotica! Impossible to read without becoming aroused! I would think women would love this more than men!