All Comments on 'Cynthia Lures Her Neighbor Ch. 01'

Wonderful start! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Excellent beginning

Great lead up to fun possibilities but it comes across as quite the tease. I was so ready to give it a five but I'm feeling unfulfilled here and anxious for more. Thinking this is why there have been no ratings so far. Might have been best to combine with part two (whenever that might be) and give us something to truly enjoy the experience.

****Interesting start I hope Stuart is up for the job and we don't have to wait forever for a follow-up!! Thanks for sharing.

Terrific start. Left me (and Stuart) wanting so much more...

Hot,but no action sucks. I probably increase my rating once I see how the rest of the story goes. Solid 4 for now

Thanks for the warm feedback and comments. Cynthia ramps things up in Chapter 2 (definitely more action as requested) now submitted for moderation. Chapter 3 will follow a day or two later.

Almost gave you 4☆, because of the sudden ending, but I realized I wanted more because it's so well done, and because I know there's more ;->